Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng bị lộn xộn do lỗi phát âm, từ thiếu chính xác và nhiều tiếng ngập ngừng. Bạn nên: 1) Nói rõ ràng và tránh tiếng “uh/umm” bằng cách tạm dừng im lặng khi cần nghĩ; 2) Dùng từ chính xác (ví dụ “visually striking” thay cho “visually ski”); 3) Giữ cấu trúc ngắn gọn: chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ, không quá 3–4 câu; 4) Thêm 1 chi tiết cụ thể về cách bạn chụp (ví dụ: golden hour, composition) để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I especially like landscapes and urban scenes because they are visually striking and help me remember places I visit. For example, when I travel I often photograph sunsets during the golden hour to capture warm light and the atmosphere of the location.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có quan điểm rõ nhưng nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác và ý bị lẫn lộn. Bạn nên: 1) Sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp (ví dụ “lush greenery” thay cho “lost greenery”); 2) Tránh mâu thuẫn và sửa cấu trúc câu (ví dụ “helps me relax and take my mind off city life”); 3) Giữ câu ngắn, tối đa 3 câu, dùng liên từ khi cần (because, so) để mạch lạc; 4) Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể như hoạt động bạn thích làm ở nông thôn (đi bộ, đọc sách).

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and full of lush greenery and mountains with clean air. I often enjoy working outdoors in the countryside and listening to birds, which helps me relax and take my mind off city life. For example, I like going for long walks along country trails in the morning.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh, nhiều tiếng ngập ngừng và thiếu thông tin cụ thể. Bạn nên: 1) Trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I prefer views in other countries); 2) Giải thích lý do ngắn gọn và cụ thể (to experience different cultures, landscapes); 3) Tránh lặp và ngập ngừng bằng cách chuẩn bị cụm câu đơn giản sẵn; 4) Kết thúc bằng ví dụ cụ thể về một nơi bạn muốn ghé thăm hoặc một loại cảnh bạn muốn thấy.

Exemplo: It depends, but recently I prefer views in other countries because I want to experience different cultures and landscapes. For example, I would love to see the dramatic coastlines of Norway or the historic cityscapes of Europe to broaden my perspective.

× I especially like landscape and urban scenery because they are visually ski, uh, skiing and help me remember the place I visit.

✓ I especially like landscape and urban scenery because they are visually striking and help me remember the places I visit.

The speaker attempted to use 'ski/ skiing' incorrectly; the correct present participle/adjective here is 'striking' (a present participle used adjectivally) meaning visually impressive. Also pluralize 'place' to 'places' to match the general idea. Suggestion: use adjectives formed from verbs (present participles) correctly and ensure noun forms match number.

× For example, when I travel, I often take photos of sunset entry to capture the atmosphere of the place.

✓ For example, when I travel, I often take photos of sunsets to capture the atmosphere of the place.

The phrase 'sunset entry' is incorrect. Use the noun 'sunset' (plural 'sunsets' for habitual action). 'To capture the atmosphere' is correct. Suggestion: use common collocations like 'take photos of sunsets' or 'take sunset photos'.

× I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and full of lost greenery and mountain which spreads clean air.

✓ I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and full of lush greenery and mountains that spread clean air.

'Lost greenery' is incorrect; likely meant 'lush greenery'. 'Mountain' should be plural 'mountains' to agree with 'full of'. Use 'that spread' to form the relative clause; 'spreads' would not agree with plural subject. Suggestion: choose correct adjective ('lush') and ensure noun number and verb agreement in relative clauses.

× I often enjoy working in the countryside and listening to the birds which helps me angry and take my mind observe observes of city life.

✓ I often enjoy working in the countryside and listening to the birds, which helps me relax and take my mind off the stresses of city life.

Original has several errors: 'which helps me angry' is wrong—use 'helps me relax' or 'makes me feel less angry'. 'Take my mind observe observes of city life' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'take my mind off the stresses of city life' (use phrasal verb 'take off' plus noun). Also add comma before non-defining relative clause. Suggestion: use correct verbs and idiomatic phrasal verbs, and place commas for clarity.

× It depends, but now when I have finished, uh, finished explore all of my country, now I prefer the other countries uh, because umm, uh, they umm, because I I want to know more about the.

✓ It depends, but now that I have finished exploring my country, I prefer other countries because I want to learn more about them.

Use 'finished exploring' (verb + -ing after 'finish') and 'my country' without 'all of' is acceptable but optional. 'Prefer the other countries' is unidiomatic; use 'prefer other countries'. End with a clear object: 'learn more about them.' Suggestion: after 'have finished' use gerund 'exploring'; avoid filler words and complete the sentence with a clear object pronoun.