Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Réduisez les hésitations et améliorez la structure en commençant par une phrase claire, puis ajoutez un ou deux détails concrets et reliés par des mots de liaison. Par exemple, évitez les fragments (« Gives me...») et utilisez un connecteur pour lier l’idée principale et le détail. Travaillez aussi la précision lexicale (par ex. «perspective» → «perspectives») et la prononciation des mots clés.

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of different views because they inspire my work. For example, photographing old buildings gives me ideas for architectural sketches, and natural landscapes help me choose colours and textures for illustrations.

Sugestão: Clarifiez et condensez votre réponse: commencez par une phrase directe mentionnant votre préférence, puis ajoutez un ou deux motifs concrets et liés par des connecteurs (because, for example, moreover). Évitez répétitions («and take pictures and have and make great memories») et simplifiez la formulation pour plus d’efficacité.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because the city’s architecture and street scenes are full of character. For example, I enjoy photographing old facades and busy markets, which often inspire photo series and memorable shots.

Sugestão: Évitez les hésitations et les expressions vagues. Donnez une réponse directe puis un détail précis expliquant pourquoi, en utilisant un connecteur. Par exemple, remplacez «I think any views are beautiful» par une phrase plus ciblée et développez avec un exemple concret de ce que vous aimeriez découvrir.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I haven’t explored them yet and they often show different cultures and landscapes. For instance, I’d love to photograph coastal villages abroad to see how local architecture contrasts with my country’s styles.

× Gives me a lot of inspirations for my work.

✓ It gives me a lot of inspiration for my work.

The sentence is missing a subject and uses an uncountable noun incorrectly. In English, 'give' needs a subject (here 'It' referring to taking pictures). Also, 'inspiration' is usually uncountable, so use the singular form 'inspiration' rather than the plural 'inspirations'. Suggestion: start the sentence with 'It' or rephrase to 'Taking pictures gives me a lot of inspiration.'

× Urban areas because there's this a tendency in the way how things are done or created.

✓ Urban areas, because there's a tendency in the way things are done or created.

The phrase 'there's this a tendency' incorrectly combines the demonstrative 'this' with the indefinite article 'a'. Remove 'this' or 'a'. Also 'the way how' is redundant; use 'the way' or 'how'. Suggestion: '...there's a tendency in the way things are done.'

× I like to explore those spaces and take pictures and have and make great memories.

✓ I like to explore those spaces, take pictures, and make great memories.

The original contains repeated conjunctions and an extra 'have and make' which is redundant. Use parallel structure with verbs in the same form: 'explore', 'take', 'make'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: keep verbs parallel and remove unnecessary words.

× But I like from other countries 'cause I haven't, umm, discovered them yet.

✓ But I like views from other countries because I haven't discovered them yet.

The original places 'from other countries' after 'like' which makes the structure awkward; specify what is liked: 'views from other countries'. Also replace the informal ''cause' with 'because' in formal speech. Remove filler 'umm' in written correction. Suggestion: say 'I like views from other countries because I haven't discovered them yet.'