Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and relevant, but it's slightly repetitive and some phrasing is awkward ("look into when I grow up"). To improve, make your main point in the first sentence, avoid repetition, and use clearer phrases about memories and reasons. Add one brief specific example and a linking word to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views, especially when I travel, because photos help me preserve memories. For example, I once took a panoramic shot of a coastal town that reminds me of the relaxed feeling I had on that trip.

Sugestão: Good direct answer and relevant supporting details. Improve by tightening language ("nature has so much to offer" → "nature offers so much") and by using a linking word to join reason and personal memory. You can add a specific sensory detail to make the response more vivid.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because nature offers so much variety and looking at it gives me peace and a sense of freedom. For instance, seeing rice terraces reminds me of childhood mornings when I played near my grandparents' farm.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question and lists specific places, which is good, but pronunciation or naming is unclear ("Mayan Volcano, the AL Volcano"). The sentence is a bit long and slightly unorganized. Improve by giving a concise topic sentence, then one or two clear examples with brief reasons, and avoid listing many names without context.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because the Philippines has so many dramatic landscapes. For example, I loved visiting Mount Pinatubo for its crater lake, and our seascapes are perfect for sunset photography.

× Whether it is a cityscape or a landscape, I love that those pictures will give me a memory that I want to look into when I grow up or when I get older.

✓ Whether it is a cityscape or a landscape, I love that those pictures will give me memories that I can look back on when I grow up or when I get older.

The original uses 'a memory' with 'those pictures' (plural) which is mismatched (singular/plural) and awkward. Also 'look into' is incorrect collocation for recalling memories; 'look back on' or 'remember' is correct. Use plural 'memories' to agree with 'those pictures' and 'can look back on' to express reviewing memories in the future. This corrects a singular/plural issue (ID 1) and improves verb/preposition choice (ID 11).

× I love how the nature has so much to offer and it gives me peace and freedom by just looking at it.

✓ I love how nature has so much to offer and it gives me peace and freedom just by looking at it.

The noun 'nature' is uncountable and does not require the definite article 'the' in this general sense. Removing 'the' fixes the article error (ID 22). Also 'by just looking at it' is more natural as 'just by looking at it' for adverb placement, but the primary issue addressed is the unnecessary article.

× It helps me reminisce the places that I grew up with when I was a child.

✓ It helps me reminisce about the places where I grew up when I was a child.

The verb 'reminisce' requires the preposition 'about' to introduce the object, so add 'about' (preposition error ID 11). Also 'grew up with' is incorrect collocation; use 'where I grew up' to indicate location (sentence structure/word choice). The tense 'grew up' is correct as a past tense action, so keep it.

× The Philippines is well known for its beautiful landscapes and different tourist destinations such as the Mayan Volcano, the AL Volcano, Mount Pinatubo which I really enjoyed, and such as the seascapes.

✓ The Philippines is well known for its beautiful landscapes and various tourist destinations, such as Mayon Volcano, Al Volcano, and Mount Pinatubo, which I really enjoyed, as well as its seascapes.

Problems include awkward quantifier/word choice ('different' is vague; 'various' is better) and redundancy with 'such as' used twice. Also volcano names likely require correct forms (e.g., 'Mayon Volcano') and punctuation to separate items and the relative clause. Rephrase to list items clearly and use 'as well as its seascapes' to include seascapes properly. This addresses incorrect quantifier use (ID 14), article/word order, and sentence structure (ID 26).