Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more fluent and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations, and add one specific detail to enrich the answer. Use a linking phrase to connect your example. Keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often capture sunrises and sunsets in my area because the sky changes color dramatically, and I like how the light highlights the landscape. I usually go out early in the morning or just before dusk to get the best shots.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence and then one or two specific reasons with a linking word to compare. Avoid repeating the same idea twice; instead, contrast urban and rural features briefly.

Exemplo: I appreciate views in both urban and rural areas. Urban scenes appeal to me because of the dramatic architecture and city lights, whereas rural views are relaxing with open fields and natural scenery, so I enjoy both for different reasons.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid negative phrasing about your country, and give a specific reason or example. Use linking words to explain why and limit to three sentences max.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering new landscapes and cultural scenery. For instance, visiting coastal areas abroad showed me different vegetation and architecture, which felt more interesting than familiar local spots.

× Yes, I do. For instance, uh, sunset and sunrise are often, umm, visible in my area. I'd like to take picture of them often.

✓ Yes, I do. For instance, sunsets and sunrises are often visible in my area. I'd like to take pictures of them often.

Errors: 'sunset and sunrise' should be plural (sunsets and sunrises) because the speaker refers to these events in general (Grammar problem type ID 1: singular and plural issue). 'take picture' should be 'take pictures' — countable noun requires plural when speaking generally. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when referring to habitual or general occurrences; ensure countable nouns have appropriate singular/plural form. ID: 1

× I prefer them both because for me they're all as pretty.

✓ I prefer both because, to me, they are equally pretty.

Errors: 'them both' is acceptable but 'I prefer both' is clearer. 'for me they're all as pretty' is ungrammatical; use 'to me, they are equally pretty' to compare correctly (Grammar problem type ID 13: incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). Suggestion: Use 'equally' to express that two things have the same degree of an adjective and place adverbs correctly before adjectives. ID: 13

× No, nothing's much better than the other, so I prefer both of them.

✓ Nothing is much better than the other, so I prefer both of them.

Error: Contraction 'nothing's' is informal but acceptable; main issue is referent: 'the other' is awkward when comparing two categories; clearer: 'neither is much better than the other' or 'nothing is much better than the other.' This relates to pronoun/reference clarity (Grammar problem type ID 12). Suggestion: Use 'neither' when negating a choice between two items to avoid ambiguity. ID: 12

× I prefer the views in another country than my own because to be honest, the environment here is not as pleasing as the the other country I admit.

✓ I prefer the views in other countries to those in my own because, to be honest, the environment here is not as pleasing as in other countries, I admit.

Errors: 'in another country than my own' should be 'in other countries to those in my own' — use 'prefer A to B' construction and plural 'other countries' if speaking generally (Grammar problem type ID 11). 'as pleasing as the the other country' is incorrect; use 'as in other countries.' Suggestion: Use 'prefer A to B' and compare comparable structures; avoid repeating 'the.' ID: 11

× And for me, seeing new places that I've never seen before are much better.

✓ And for me, seeing new places that I've never seen before is much better.

Error: 'seeing... are' — gerund phrase 'seeing new places that I've never seen before' is singular and requires singular verb 'is' (Grammar problem type ID 27: subject-verb agreement errors). Suggestion: Treat gerund phrases as singular subjects and match the verb accordingly; alternatively rephrase: 'I prefer seeing new places I have never seen before.' ID: 27