Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g. “I am used to”) and grammatical errors (tense and article use).

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, I’ve been taking photos since I was a child, and now that I have my own phone I usually photograph new places I visit, especially interesting street scenes or landscapes.

Sugestão: This answer is clear and well-structured. To improve further, add a linking phrase to connect reasons and include a brief comparison to urban views for contrast. Use slightly more varied vocabulary (e.g. “serene”, “tranquil”).

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because I was born and raised in Tokyo and enjoy escaping the city. For instance, when I visit the countryside I often photograph flowers and trees, as the natural scenery is tranquil and refreshing, unlike the busy streets of the city.

Sugestão: Clarify meaning and fix grammar. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give two clear, contrasted examples using linking words (“for example”, “on the other hand”). Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases (e.g. “I am still girl”).

Exemplo: I enjoy views both in my country and abroad. For example, from a high tower in Tokyo I can see the whole cityscape, while in Hawaii I love photographing completely different scenery, such as sandy beaches and palm trees.

× Yes of course my dad and mom are not good at taking photos so I am used to.

✓ Yes, of course; my dad and mom are not good at taking photos, so I am used to it.

The original sentence omits the object 'it' after 'used to'. The phrase 'be used to' requires a noun or pronoun (or verb-ing) to indicate what one is accustomed to. Add 'it' to complete the phrase and add commas for clarity.

× I used to take photos since I was little and now I have my own phone so I do usually take pictures when I go to a new place.

✓ I have taken photos since I was little, and now that I have my own phone I usually take pictures when I go to a new place.

The phrase 'used to' indicates a past habit and conflicts with 'since I was little' which requires present perfect ('have taken') to show a continuing action. Also move adverb 'usually' to a natural position ('usually take') and add conjunction punctuation for clarity.

× I prefer rural areas because I was born and raised in Tokyo, so I enjoy escaping the city.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I was born and raised in Tokyo, so I enjoy escaping the city.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It clearly explains reason and result. (Included to show no issues found.)

× When I visit the countryside, I often take pictures of flowers and trees because the natural scenery is peaceful and refreshing.

✓ When I visit the countryside, I often take pictures of flowers and trees because the natural scenery is peaceful and refreshing.

This sentence is correct. 'Visiting' could be used in a different structure but 'When I visit' is appropriate. No grammar changes required.

× I do both, I am still girl so when I go to the high tower I can see all of views of Tokyo for example but when I visit Hawaii they has completely different views such as beaches and palm trees which I like.

✓ I do both. I am still a girl, so when I go to a tall tower I can see all the views of Tokyo, for example; but when I visit Hawaii, it has completely different scenery such as beaches and palm trees, which I like.

Multiple issues: missing article 'a' before 'girl' (article error), 'high tower' is unnatural — use 'tall tower', 'all of views' should be 'all the views' (article and noun phrase), run-on sentence needs splitting or punctuation (sentence structure), and 'they has' is incorrect subject-verb and pronoun choice — use singular 'it has' to refer to 'Hawaii' (incorrect use of pronouns and subject-verb agreement). Also 'views' vs 'scenery' — 'scenery' is more natural for landscape. Corrections address pronouns, articles, verb agreement, and sentence flow.