Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct small grammar errors (e.g., tense and prepositions) and replace repetitive phrases. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different landscapes. I usually take my film camera whenever I travel outside the city to places like Factoria Peak or Cyclone Beach, because I love capturing wide open scenes and natural light. For example, at Factoria Peak I often focus on the morning mist over the valley.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first and then provide one or two clear reasons with specific examples. Avoid hesitations and repetition. Use linking words (because, so, for example) to make the response coherent and correct sentence structure (subject-verb agreement and smoother phrasing). Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views rather than urban ones because I find open fields and natural scenery more relaxing. For example, when I visit places like Marlboro in Europe, the landscapes feel very different from Hong Kong’s dense cityscape, and I enjoy the peaceful atmosphere there.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give specific reasons with fewer repetitions. Correct grammar (use 'grew up' and 'have seen') and use linking words (because, so, therefore). Provide one concrete example to support your point. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I grew up in Hong Kong and have seen the same types of scenery for many years. Therefore, traveling abroad feels refreshing—for instance, seeing vast European farmlands felt completely new and exciting to me.

× I used to bring my film camera every time when I go out to the other side, far away from the city, like the Factoria Peak, the Cyclone beach.

✓ I used to bring my film camera every time I went out to the countryside, far away from the city, to places like Factoria Peak and Cyclone Beach.

Mixed past and present tenses: 'used to' indicates a past habitual action, so the clause should use past tense ('went') rather than present ('go'). Also 'every time when' is wordy; 'every time I went' or 'whenever I went' is correct. 'the other side' is vague; 'the countryside' fits context. Use 'to places like' and use 'and' between examples.

× I prefer fields in rural areas actually, but I live in the urban city.

✓ I actually prefer fields in rural areas, but I live in the city.

Awkward word order and redundancy: 'in the urban city' repeats meaning; 'the city' suffices. Move 'actually' to follow the subject or start of clause for natural emphasis. This fixes sentence flow.

× But every time when I go to, when I go travel, I when I see someone like somewhere like Marlboro, like the European side, I do think is it so different than Hong Kong and I love the view.

✓ But whenever I travel and see places like Marlboro or parts of Europe, I think they are very different from Hong Kong, and I love the view.

Multiple problems: unnecessary repetition ('go to, when I go travel, I when I see'), incorrect word order ('I do think is it so different than' is ungrammatical), and incorrect comparison ('different from' preferred over 'different than'). Simplify to a clear clause: 'whenever I travel and see places..., I think they are very different from Hong Kong.'

× To be honest, I prefer feel in other countries because like as I said, I grow, grow up in Hong Kong.

✓ To be honest, I prefer the feeling I get in other countries because, as I said, I grew up in Hong Kong.

Incorrect verb forms and structure: 'prefer feel' is ungrammatical — use 'prefer the feeling' or 'prefer being' and 'grow, grow up' should be 'grew up' (past tense). Remove redundant 'like' and place commas appropriately.

× I see the fields in Hong Kong for 24 years.

✓ I have seen fields in Hong Kong for 24 years.

Use present perfect ('have seen') to describe an action that began in the past and continues to the present (for 24 years). Simple present 'see' is incorrect here.

× So every time when I go travel, when I go see other fields in other countries, I do think it's very, very new for me.

✓ So every time I travel and see fields in other countries, I think it's very new to me.

Unnecessary 'when I go' repetition and awkward 'do think' emphatic use is unnecessary. Use simple present 'travel' and 'see' for habitual actions; use 'new to me' rather than 'new for me' for natural phrasing.