Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp (thì và dạng động từ), phát âm rõ hơn, và tổ chức câu mạch lạc: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó nêu 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể có liên kết bằng từ nối. Tránh từ không rõ nghĩa (ví dụ: "fuse") và nói lược, dùng từ chính xác hơn (ví dụ: "scenes" hoặc "views").

Exemplo: I don't take photos of every scene. I only photograph unique views, such as a deserted beach or an unusual landscape, because they feel special and memorable.

Sugestão: Rút gọn câu, sửa ngữ pháp (số nhiều/ít, mạo từ), dùng liên từ phù hợp để liên kết ý (e.g., "because", "so", "for example"). Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể hoặc cảm giác cá nhân ngắn để cụ thể hoá lý do thích vùng nông thôn.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because city scenes feel ordinary to me since I live in a town. Rural areas offer unique landscapes and a tranquil atmosphere, for example wide rice fields and quiet rivers, which I find relaxing.

Sugestão: Sửa cấu trúc câu để rõ ràng: trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích bằng lý do cụ thể. Tránh các cụm từ lủng củng ("Absolute leader", "observe that few"). Nên dùng từ vựng chính xác ("prefer", "opportunities", "travel around"). Giữ độ dài tối đa 5 câu và mạch lạc với các liên từ đơn giản.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I haven't had many opportunities to travel around Vietnam and see its peaceful landscapes. If I had more chances to travel abroad, I would also enjoy discovering different scenery in other countries.

× Not really, I just taking pictures with the unique views such as, uh, the view at the beach or something rare like not every fuse that I will taking pictures because it is so ridiculous and I don't have any reasons to do that.

✓ Not really, I just take pictures of unique views, such as the view at the beach or something rare; I don't take pictures of every scene because that would be ridiculous and I don't have any reason to do that.

The student used 'just taking' instead of the simple present 'just take' for a habitual action. Use simple present for habits. 'Taking pictures with the unique views' should be 'take pictures of unique views' (correct preposition and pluralization). 'Not every fuse' is incorrect vocabulary; replace with 'every scene.' 'I will taking' mixes future and -ing incorrectly; use simple present 'I don't take'. Also 'any reasons' should be singular 'any reason' or 'any reasons' with appropriate context; here singular is natural. Suggest practicing subject + simple present verb for routines and correct prepositions: 'take pictures of'. Use 'would be' for hypothetical ('that would be ridiculous').

× Maybe I will prefer views in rural areas because at the moment I live in a town down, so every views in the city it is really normal with me and it not make me feel interested in that.

✓ Maybe I prefer views in rural areas because at the moment I live in a small town, so the views in the city are very ordinary to me and they do not interest me.

The student used 'Maybe I will prefer' which wrongly mixes future with a general preference; use simple present 'I prefer' for general preferences. 'Town down' is incorrect collocation; use 'small town' or 'town nearby'. 'Every views' is plural with incorrect determiner; use 'the views' or 'city views'. Extra pronoun 'it' is unnecessary. Subject-verb agreement: 'views ... are' (plural). Use 'do not interest me' rather than 'not make me feel interested'. Suggest using simple present for preferences and correct noun phrases: 'the views in the city are very ordinary to me.'

× But in the rural areas everything is so unique and unusual.

✓ But in rural areas everything is unique and unusual.

'The rural areas' is not wrong but often 'in rural areas' is more natural for a general statement. No plural marker problem in 'everything' but the article 'the' is unnecessary with the general plural. Suggest using 'in rural areas' for generalizations.

× In addition it will bring the tranquil view, so I'm really interested in that.

✓ In addition, it creates a tranquil scene, so I'm really interested in that.

'It will bring the tranquil view' sounds unnatural and mixes future with a general observation; use present 'it creates' or 'it gives a tranquil view/scene' for habitual or general effects. 'Tranquil view' is awkward collocation; 'tranquil scene' or 'peaceful atmosphere' is better. Suggest using present simple for general truths and choosing natural collocations.

× Absolute leader, I will prefer views in my own country because I don't have opportunities to travel around Vietnam as well as observe the tranquil views.

✓ Absolutely, I prefer views in my own country because I don't have many opportunities to travel around Vietnam and see tranquil scenes.

'Absolute leader' is a wrong phrase; likely 'absolutely'. 'I will prefer' incorrectly uses future for a general preference; use 'I prefer'. 'Opportunities' needs a quantifier: 'many opportunities' or 'the opportunity'. 'Observe the tranquil views' is awkward; 'see tranquil scenes' or 'observe tranquil views' is better. Suggest using 'absolutely' and simple present for preferences and correct collocations.

× But if you have a chance, I feel that I will, uh, enjoy all the times as well as observe that few.

✓ But if I have the chance, I think I will enjoy every moment and observe a few of them.

The student used 'if you have a chance' but should speak about themselves: 'if I have the chance'. 'I feel that I will, uh, enjoy all the times' is awkward; use 'I think I will enjoy every moment'. 'Observe that few' is ungrammatical; likely 'observe a few of them' or 'see a few views'. Also prefer 'I think' over 'I feel' for prediction. Suggest using correct subject, natural expressions ('every moment', 'a few of them') and simple future 'I will' for specific future possibility.