Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatical, concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., 'it makes me wind down', 'a natural scene'). Avoid redundancy (do not repeat 'different' too often).

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing sunsets over the sea and early-morning skies because they help me wind down and feel connected to nature. For example, last month I took photos of a pink sunrise that looked like a painting, which made the whole experience very calming.

Sugestão: Open with a clear preference sentence, then give specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (singular/plural, verbs, articles) and tighten phrasing. Replace vague phrases with concrete details (e.g., 'open fields, forests, and rivers').

Exemplo: I prefer rural views. Because rural landscapes—such as open fields, forests and rivers—are quieter and less crowded than cities, they help me relax and reflect. For instance, walking along a country path with wide views of rice paddies always helps me clear my mind.

Sugestão: Be clearer and grammatically correct. Start with a direct response (e.g., 'I prefer...') and explain reasons. Correct verb forms and clarify your travel experience. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to contrast ideas, and give a specific example of a country you'd like to visit and why.

Exemplo: I would prefer views in other countries if I had the chance. Although Vietnam has many breathtaking landscapes, I have not traveled abroad much; however, I would love to see the fjords of Norway for their dramatic cliffs and clear waters because they offer a very different scenery from Vietnam.

× Absolutely yes. Uh, especially the sunset on the sea or the sky during the morning, it's make me wide down and feel like a natural is something really impressive.

✓ Absolutely. Especially the sunset over the sea or the sky in the morning, it makes me wind down and feel that nature is something really impressive.

Errors: 'Absolutely yes' is awkward; use 'Absolutely'. 'on the sea' -> 'over the sea' or 'at sea' is correct preposition (preposition error, ID 11) but listed here because adjective/adverb use affects phrasing. 'during the morning' -> 'in the morning' (preposition). 'it's make' -> 'it makes' (third person singular verb agreement; ID 2). 'wide down' is incorrect word choice; correct phrase is 'wind down' (incorrect adjective/adverb or word choice). 'a natural is something' is wrong word order and article usage; should be 'nature is something'. Suggestion: use 'it makes me wind down' and 'nature' without an article. Use proper prepositions 'over' and 'in', and ensure subject-verb agreement with singular 'it makes'.

× So I really love taking different picture of the different field.

✓ So I really love taking different pictures of different fields.

Errors: 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to agree with 'different' (singular/plural issue, ID 1). 'the different field' is incorrect; use plural 'different fields' without the definite article for general statement (article error, ID 22). Suggestion: Use plural nouns when referring to multiple items and drop 'the' for generalization: 'different pictures of different fields.'

× I prefer views in a rural areas because it make me feel closer to the nature than the urban areas, more than the cities or too many highways or high buildings and it's make me connect better to myself.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they make me feel closer to nature than urban areas; cities with many highways and tall buildings make me feel less connected to myself.

Errors: 'a rural areas' mixes singular article with plural noun; should be 'rural areas' (article/number mismatch, ID 22/1). 'it make' should be 'they make' for plural subject agreement (subject-verb agreement/third person plural, ID 27/2). 'to the nature' should be 'to nature' (article error, ID 22). Repetition and run-on structure: sentence is long and unclear (sentence structure error, ID 26). 'it's make me connect' should be 'make me feel more connected' (verb form and phrasing). Suggestion: Use plural subjects with plural verbs, remove unnecessary articles with uncountable nouns like 'nature', and split long sentences for clarity.

× To be honest, I have never like travel aboard so that address what surrounding Vietnam.

✓ To be honest, I have never liked traveling abroad, so I usually stay around Vietnam.

Errors: 'have never like' should be 'have never liked' (present perfect requires past participle 'liked'; past participle issue, ID 9 / past tense issue, ID 5). 'travel aboard' should be 'travel abroad' (spelling error and incorrect word; treated as vocabulary but affects grammar). 'so that address what surrounding Vietnam' is ungrammatical and unclear (sentence structure error, ID 26). Suggestion: Use correct past participle with present perfect and correct spelling 'abroad', and rephrase unclear clause to 'I usually stay around Vietnam' or 'I stay within Vietnam.'

× Vietnam have many breathtaking view but I prefer in other countries if I have a chance to visit these countries.

✓ Vietnam has many breathtaking views, but I would prefer other countries if I had the chance to visit them.

Errors: 'Vietnam have' should be 'Vietnam has' (subject-verb agreement; singular government, ID 27). 'many breathtaking view' should be plural 'views' (singular/plural issue, ID 1). 'I prefer in other countries if I have a chance to visit these countries' contains tense and phrasing issues: use conditional 'would prefer' and past subjunctive 'if I had the chance' (future/conditional tense, ID 7). Also avoid repeating 'countries' — use pronoun 'them' (pronoun use, ID 12). Suggestion: Match singular subject with singular verb, pluralize countable nouns when needed, and use conditional structure for hypothetical preferences.