Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise, correct grammar, and give a clear reason or a short example. Avoid vague or incorrect word choices (e.g. “adverse”). Use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. However, I usually only use my smartphone, which has a poor camera, so my pictures often lack detail. For example, when I tried to photograph a sunset last week, the colours looked dull and the image was blurry.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g. “in rural areas”), and give specific supporting details. Use linking words (because, so, for example). Avoid repetition and finish the idea.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because I grew up in a city and find the countryside very different and refreshing. For example, I enjoy wide open fields and traditional houses, and the peaceful atmosphere helps me relax.

Sugestão: Answer directly, correct grammar and make content specific and balanced. Avoid negative absolute statements about your country; give concrete reasons and an example. Use linking words like because and for instance.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I like discovering unfamiliar architecture and cultural sights. For instance, when I visited Spain I enjoyed the unique buildings and lively streets, which felt very different from the places in my hometown.

× Yes, absolutely. But I have a big issue on that.

✓ Yes, absolutely. But I have a big issue with that.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'issue'; 'issue with' is the proper collocation in English. Use 'with' to indicate the subject of the problem. Suggestion: say 'I have a big issue with that' or 'I have a problem with that.'

× I don't have any professional cameras and my smartphone's camera is very adverse to take picture.

✓ I don't have any professional cameras and my smartphone's camera is very bad at taking pictures.

Several issues: 'adverse' is an adjective meaning harmful and is inappropriate here; 'bad at' + -ing is the correct pattern to express inability; 'take picture' needs plural 'pictures' and the gerund 'taking'. Suggestion: use 'bad at taking pictures' or 'not good at taking photos.'

× I would say with an rural areas because of my hometown, I live in urban areas since I was born so the rural areas were so interesting to me and there have a lot of lot of.

✓ I would say rural areas because of my hometown. I have lived in an urban area since I was born, so rural areas are very interesting to me and there are a lot of them.

Multiple errors corrected under allowed types: 'an rural areas' wrong article and number; use 'rural areas' or 'a rural area'. 'I live in urban areas since I was born' needs present perfect 'have lived' for an action continuing to present. 'the rural areas were so interesting to me' should be 'are very interesting to me' to reflect current feeling (present tense). 'there have a lot of lot of' is ungrammatical; correct is 'there are a lot of them' or 'there are a lot of rural areas.' Suggestions: match singular/plural and use present perfect for life-long situations, and 'there are' for existence of plural items.

× I prefer in other countries because there are so many new things to view and to do.

✓ I prefer other countries because there are so many new things to see and do.

Use 'prefer' without the preposition 'in' when comparing choices: say 'prefer other countries.' 'View' as a verb is correct but less natural here; 'see' is more common. Also avoid repeating 'to' before parallel verbs: 'to see and do' or simply 'see and do.'

× In my country there have not any good things or new buildings.

✓ In my country there are not any good things or new buildings.

The existential construction requires 'there are' for plural nouns, not 'there have.' Use 'there are not any' or 'there aren't any.' Also consider more natural phrasing: 'In my country there aren't many new buildings or interesting attractions.'