Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Отвечая на этот вопрос, нужно прямо сказать своё мнение в одном предложении, затем дать 1–2 конкретных причины. Избегайте заполнителей («uh», «umm») и неясных слов. Используйте связки для логичности (for example, because, so). Старайтесь не превышать 3–4 предложения и говорите более последовательно.

Exemplo: Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because they help me remember special moments. For example, I often photograph city streets and sunsets to capture the atmosphere. This also motivates me to explore new places.

Sugestão: Нужно давать чёткий топик-сентенс и приводить понятные, конкретные примеры. Избегайте неправильной лексики и неясных словосочетаний. Используйте связки (because, for example, also) и разнообразную, но уместную лексику (sights, architecture, parks, skyline).

Exemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the architecture and lively streets. For example, I love walking along riverfront promenades and photographing interesting buildings. Also, city parks and skyline views are visually striking.

Sugestão: Отвечайте прямо: выберите одну опцию или скажите, что вам нравятся оба варианта, и объясните почему. Дайте конкретные детали (например, природные достопримечательности, культурные особенности). Уберите заполнители и используйте связки (however, because, for example) для ясности.

Exemplo: I like views both in my country and abroad because each place has unique scenery. For example, my country has beautiful mountains and lakes, while other countries often offer different natural landscapes and cultural sights. Therefore I enjoy visiting new places to see diverse views.

× MMM ithappen on situation because every a view of probably, uh, pitfall or difference, uh, we should take a photo or pictures, uh, situation.

✓ It happens in situations because every view probably has its own features or differences, so we should take a photo of the scene.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: words are misplaced or incomplete ('ithappen', 'every a view of probably'), articles are incorrect, and the meaning is unclear. The corrected sentence organizes ideas into a clear cause-and-effect structure: subject + verb ('It happens'), reason phrase ('in situations'), and a clear clause explaining that each view has features, followed by a recommendation. Suggestion: simplify ideas, use complete words, keep a clear subject and verb for each clause, and use appropriate articles ('a photo', 'the scene').

× I prefer view in urban area because urban area always the beautiful sights, for instance patties or tofu towel is this.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because urban areas always have beautiful sights; for instance, parks or historic buildings.

Errors include missing plural markers and articles, and incorrect verb usage. 'view' should be plural 'views' and 'urban area' should be plural 'urban areas' to match general preference. The verb 'always the beautiful sights' lacks 'have'. The examples 'patties or tofu towel' are unclear and likely wrong words; they were replaced with 'parks or historic buildings' to make sense. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, pluralize general nouns when talking about types, and use 'have' to indicate possession ('areas have sights').

× Umm, every country have uh, prefer, uh, views and I like every views, but we should uh, uh, look at umm, natural.

✓ Every country has preferable views, and I like all kinds of views, but we should look at natural scenery.

'Every country have' is incorrect because 'every' requires a singular verb: use 'has'. 'I like every views' is incorrect: use 'all kinds of views' or 'every view' (singular). 'Look at umm, natural' is incomplete; 'natural scenery' clarifies the idea. Suggestion: with 'every' use singular verb forms; choose correct quantifiers ('all kinds of' for plural meaning) and complete noun phrases ('natural scenery').