Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce fillers (uh, um) and make one clear topic sentence. Keep answer within 2–3 concise sentences: state that you enjoy taking photos and give a specific reason or brief example. Use linking words like because or so to join ideas and choose clearer nouns (photos, albums) instead of repeating vague phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photos help me remember special moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines and later look at them in my phone album to relive the experience.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, and). Avoid repetition and vague words like 'better view' — explain what makes it better (colors, peace, natural features).

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they are more colorful and peaceful. For example, rolling green fields and wide blue skies create vivid scenes that I enjoy photographing and that help me relax.

Sugestão: Avoid unclear or incorrect words (e.g., 'grainy' and 'dessert' are wrong here). Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain reasons with specific descriptions and one example. Use comparative language correctly (more varied, more colorful).

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often have more varied and colorful landscapes. For instance, when I visited a coastal town abroad I saw bright beaches, green hills and historic buildings — very different from the mostly brown, dry scenery at home.

× Yes, I like to take uh, pictures for uh, different views, uh, because I think it's uh, it will be a great memory, uh, if I come back to uh, uh, the photo album in my phone.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I think they will be great memories when I look back at the photo album on my phone.

The expression 'like to take' is acceptable, but 'like taking' is more natural when referring to a general preference. 'Pictures for different views' is incorrect preposition use; 'pictures of different views' is correct (preposition issue, ID 11). 'It will be a great memory' is singular and mismatches 'pictures'; use plural 'they will be great memories' (singular/plural issue, ID 1). 'If I come back to the photo album' is awkward; use 'when I look back at the photo album' to express reviewing photos (tense/aspect and collocation). Suggestions: use 'like taking', 'pictures of', match plural forms, and use 'look back at' for reviewing photos.

× Well, I think I prefer the rural, uh, areas views, uh, because uh, they have like more colorful, uh, views, umm, such as green with the sky.

✓ Well, I think I prefer rural views because they are more colorful, for example with green fields against the sky.

'The rural, areas views' is incorrectly ordered and contains extra articles; correct phrase is 'rural views' (order/article errors, IDs 18 and 22). 'They have like more colorful, views' misuses 'have' and fillers; use 'they are more colorful' to describe views (incorrect use of verbs/adjectives, ID 13). 'Such as green with the sky' is awkward; specify 'green fields against the sky' for clarity. Suggestions: remove unnecessary articles and fillers, use adjective 'rural' before 'views', and use 'are more colorful' to describe appearance.

× They give uh, better, uh, uh, view.

✓ They offer a better view.

'They give better view' omits article and misuses verb choice; correct collocation is 'offer a better view' or 'provide a better view' and include the article 'a' (article/pronoun and collocation errors, IDs 22 and 12). Suggestions: use 'offer/provide' with 'a better view' and avoid filler words.

× I'd prefer the view in other countries because the other countries are uh, umm, like more grainy uh, than our country.

✓ I'd prefer the views in other countries because they tend to be more varied than in our country.

'The view in other countries' should be plural 'views' when speaking generally (singular/plural issue, ID 1). Repeating 'the other countries' is awkward; use 'they' or 'other countries' without 'the' (article error, ID 22). 'Grainy' is likely the wrong adjective here; 'more varied' or 'different' fits context. Also comparative 'more grainy than our country' is unnatural. Suggestions: use plural 'views', avoid unnecessary 'the', and choose appropriate adjectives like 'varied' or 'interesting'.

× Uh, our country is a dessert, so umm, it's like everything in brown.

✓ Our country is a desert, so everything tends to be brown.

'Dessert' is the wrong word (food) instead of 'desert' (dry land) — this is a vocabulary error but maps to incorrect adjective/noun use (ID 13). 'It's like everything in brown' is ungrammatical; use 'everything tends to be brown' or 'everything is brown'. Suggestions: use correct noun 'desert' and natural phrasing 'tends to be brown' to express generalization.

× So there is no view to see.

✓ So there are no views to see.

'There is' should be 'there are' because 'views' is plural (there be issue and singular/plural, IDs 3 and 1). Also plural 'views' fits context. Suggestions: use 'there are no views' when referring to multiple viewable scenes.