Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two brief supporting reasons using correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid repetition and filler phrases.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually take photos of views. I prefer to enjoy the scene with my own eyes because looking directly helps me remember details better; besides, photos often don't capture the atmosphere.

Sugestão: Clarify your reasons and use precise vocabulary. Give one clear preference sentence, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Remove unrelated or confusing phrases (e.g. 'big companies that produce Scotland').

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they offer natural landscapes and wildlife. For example, I enjoy open fields, forests and rivers, which feel more peaceful than tall buildings and busy streets in cities.

Sugestão: Answer directly and provide a concise, specific reason with a linking word. Correct grammar (e.g. 'I prefer views in other countries') and avoid fillers. Optionally add a short example of a foreign landscape you like.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because my country is very urbanised with many skyscrapers. For instance, I enjoy visiting coastal or mountainous regions abroad where the scenery is more natural and varied.

× No, I'm not really a person that enjoyed taking pictures of something.

✓ No, I'm not really a person who enjoys taking pictures of things.

Problems: 5 Past tense issue (used 'enjoyed' incorrectly) and 12 Incorrect use of pronouns ('that' should be 'who') and 1 Singular and plural issue ('something' -> 'things'). Explanation: The speaker is describing a general habit, so present simple 'enjoys' is required rather than past 'enjoyed'. Use 'who' for people instead of 'that'. Use plural 'things' to match general plural reference. Suggestion: Use 'who enjoys taking pictures of things.'

× I prefer to watching it in my with my own eyes and see everything and remember in my mind.

✓ I prefer watching it with my own eyes and seeing everything and remembering it in my mind.

Problems: 8 Verb + -ing form and 26 Sentence structure errors and 11 Incorrect use of prepositions. Explanation: After 'prefer' when contrasting activities, use the gerund without 'to' (or use 'to' + base form: 'prefer to watch'). Remove the extra 'in my' before 'with my own eyes'. Maintain parallel gerund forms: 'watching', 'seeing', 'remembering'. Include object 'it' with 'remembering'. Suggestion: Use 'I prefer watching it with my own eyes and seeing everything and remembering it in my mind.'

× I think phones aren't always the thing that we remember with them.

✓ I think phones aren't always what helps us remember things.

Problems: 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs and 12 Incorrect use of pronouns and 26 Sentence structure errors. Explanation: 'the thing that we remember with them' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'what helps us remember things' to express that phones do not always help memory. Also avoid redundant pronoun 'them'. Suggestion: 'I think phones aren't always what helps us remember things.'

× I prefer views in rural areas because there are many animals or big companies that produce Scotland, uh etcetera.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because there are many animals and farms that produce local products in Scotland.

Problems: 11 Incorrect use of prepositions and 1 Singular and plural issue and 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs. Explanation: 'big companies that produce Scotland' is wrong: companies produce goods, not a place. Likely intended 'farms' or 'local producers' in Scotland. Use 'and' instead of 'or' to list examples. Replace 'produce Scotland' with 'produce local products in Scotland.' Suggestion: 'there are many animals and farms that produce local products in Scotland.'

× I think it is better to see natural things instead of building and uh, sky highs built by people.

✓ I think it is better to see natural things instead of buildings and skyscrapers built by people.

Problems: 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs and 1 Singular and plural issue. Explanation: Use plural 'buildings' to match 'natural things' and replace 'sky highs' with the correct noun 'skyscrapers'. Suggestion: 'natural things instead of buildings and skyscrapers.'

× I prefer use in other countries because my country is full of skyscrapers, uh, buildings and malls.

✓ I prefer to use views in other countries because my country is full of skyscrapers, buildings, and malls.

Problems: 8 Verb + -ing form / 6 Present tense issue and 26 Sentence structure errors. Explanation: After 'prefer' to indicate choice here, use 'prefer to' + verb phrase or 'prefer' + noun (e.g., 'I prefer being in other countries' or 'I prefer views in other countries'). The original 'I prefer use in other countries' is ungrammatical. If speaking about views, say 'I prefer views in other countries.' Suggestion: 'I prefer views in other countries because my country is full of skyscrapers, buildings, and malls.'

× I think nature beauty is better than uh, urban, uh, views.

✓ I think natural beauty is better than urban views.

Problems: 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs and 18 Incorrect order of adjectives. Explanation: 'nature beauty' is incorrect; use the adjective 'natural' before 'beauty'. Remove extra commas and filler words. 'Urban views' is sufficient. Suggestion: 'I think natural beauty is better than urban views.'