Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organize answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition (e.g., “helps me save memories” and “capture moments” are similar). Use linking words to connect ideas and vary vocabulary (e.g., ‘preserve memories’, ‘special moments’, ‘landscapes’). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes — I enjoy taking photographs of different views because photography helps me preserve special memories. For example, when I travel I take landscape shots and close-ups of local life, which let me remember both the places and the feelings I had. This way I can look back and recall those moments clearly.

Sugestão: Answer directly (state a preference or say you like both) and then give specific reasons and an example. Reduce fillers like ‘uh’ and repetitive phrases. Use linking words (e.g., ‘however’, ‘for example’) and more precise vocabulary (e.g., ‘city skylines’, ‘countryside scenery’, ‘relaxing’). Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I enjoy both urban and rural views because each offers something different. For example, city skylines impress me with architecture and vibrant streets, while countryside scenes calm me with open fields and fresh air, which helps me relax and reduce stress.

Sugestão: Start with a clear stance (e.g., I prefer views abroad) and then give specific reasons and a concise example. Avoid vague generalizations like ‘more beautiful’ without support. Improve grammar (e.g., ‘I like to visit other countries’, ‘because they have cleaner air and well-maintained parks’). Use linking words (‘for example’, ‘because’) and keep to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often have well-preserved natural areas and cleaner air. For example, when I visited Canada I was impressed by the clear lakes and extensive national parks, which felt very different from the crowded urban areas back home.

× I love photography whenever I go somewhere and I like to take a different kind of photographs because it helps me to save our memories and it helps me capture the moments and so I can recognize these kind of moments in my future.

✓ I love photography whenever I go somewhere and I like to take different kinds of photographs because they help me save my memories and capture moments so I can remember these kinds of moments in the future.

Errors: 'a different kind of photographs' mixes singular 'a' with plural 'photographs' and should be 'different kinds of photographs' (plural noun with plural modifier). 'it helps me to save our memories' uses singular 'it' and 'our' incorrectly; use 'they help me save my memories' because photographs (plural) are the subject and 'my' matches the speaker. 'capture the moments and so I can recognize these kind of moments' is awkward: use 'capture moments so I can remember these kinds of moments' and match 'kinds' plural. Also remove unnecessary 'to' after 'help' and prefer 'remember' to 'recognize' in this context. Suggestions: ensure noun and determiner agreement (singular/plural), match pronouns to the subject, and use concise verb forms.

× Yes, I like to view a different kind of, uh, areas, whether it is a, uh, urban or rural areas, because I think those areas have a different kind of views, which helps me to feel happy.

✓ Yes, I like to see different kinds of areas, whether they are urban or rural, because I think those areas have different kinds of views that make me happy.

Errors: 'a different kind of areas' mixes singular 'a' with plural 'areas'; use 'different kinds of areas' or simply 'different areas'. 'whether it is ... urban or rural areas' uses singular 'it' and plural 'areas'; use plural agreement 'they are urban or rural'. 'a different kind of views' again mixes singular with plural; use 'different kinds of views' or 'different views'. 'which helps me to feel happy' is grammatical but 'that make me happy' is more natural and matches plural subject. Suggestions: ensure pronoun and noun number agreement and choose natural collocations (see, areas, views).

× And whenever I see different kind of views and I feel a deep sense of happiness and it gives me a reduce my stress as well.

✓ Whenever I see different kinds of views I feel a deep sense of happiness and it reduces my stress as well.

Errors: 'different kind of views' should be 'different kinds of views' for plural agreement. 'it gives me a reduce my stress' is ungrammatical: 'gives me a reduce' mixes noun and verb forms; correct is 'it reduces my stress'. Also drop redundant 'and' before the clause. Suggestions: match plural forms and use correct verb forms (subject + verb) for clarity.

× I like to go like to the another country is to watch a different kind of views.

✓ I like to go to another country to see different kinds of views.

Errors: Sentence has extra words and incorrect structure: 'I like to go like to the another country is to watch' is ungrammatical. Use the infinitive purpose structure 'go to another country to see'. 'the another country' is wrong; use 'another country' without 'the'. 'watch a different kind of views' mixes 'watch' (odd for views) and singular/plural; use 'see different kinds of views'. Suggestions: simplify to subject + verb + purpose (to...), remove redundant words, and choose appropriate verb ('see' instead of 'watch').

× Especially I like to abroad countries such as USA, Canada, because such kind of countries are more beautiful and they have a good environment if we have a good environment and good air quality.

✓ Especially I like to visit abroad countries such as the USA and Canada because those countries are more beautiful and have a good environment and good air quality.

Errors: 'like to abroad countries' misuses 'abroad' (adverb) instead of 'visit abroad countries' or 'visit countries abroad'. Use 'visit' + 'abroad' or 'visit foreign countries'. 'such kind of countries' should be 'those countries' or 'such countries'. Include definite article 'the USA'. Repetition 'if we have a good environment and good air quality' is awkward and unnecessary; simplify to 'and have a good environment and good air quality'. Suggestions: use correct verb + preposition collocations (visit abroad/visit foreign countries), use demonstratives ('those'), and include articles for country names where appropriate.

× So definitely they have a good views as compared to own country.

✓ So they definitely have better views compared to my own country.

Errors: 'they have a good views' mixes plural noun with singular determiner; use 'good views' without 'a'. 'as compared to own country' lacks possessive pronoun; use 'my own country'. Also use comparative 'better views' rather than 'a good views as compared to'. Suggestions: ensure correct determiners, include possessive pronouns when comparing, and use comparative adjectives for comparisons.