Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail and a reason. Avoid repetitive phrases. Use linking words to connect idea and reason.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially sunsets, because they capture unique colors and moods. For example, I often photograph the sunset at a nearby beach to remember the atmosphere and lighting.

Sugestão: Start with a direct preference, then give specific contrasting details and a reason using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'while'). Avoid vague phrases like 'different type of natural things.'

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they offer natural landscapes like fields, forests and rivers, while urban areas are dominated by buildings and roads. For instance, I enjoy walking along a countryside path to photograph wildflowers and streams.

Sugestão: Give a clear, single preference and avoid repeating words. If you have no strong preference, state that and explain with a specific example. Use future tense correctly and fewer hesitations.

Exemplo: At the moment I prefer photographing views in my own country because I know many beautiful local spots, but I would also love to photograph abroad when I travel. For example, I plan to visit Japan next year to capture its gardens and cityscapes and compare them with landscapes back home.

× Yeah, I really love to take pictures of different views like sunset, and by this we can create memories.

✓ Yeah, I really love taking pictures of different views like sunsets, and by doing this we can create memories.

Use of 'love to take' is not wrong but 'love taking' (verb + -ing form) is more natural here and matches the requested grammar type. Also 'sunset' should be plural 'sunsets' when referring to examples of views generally. 'By this' is awkward; 'by doing this' correctly uses a gerund phrase to explain the method. Suggestion: Prefer 'love taking' and use 'doing' for 'by doing this' and pluralize generic nouns.

× In urban areas we can say buildings but in rural areas we can see different type of natural things and that is very important.

✓ In urban areas we have buildings, but in rural areas we can see different types of natural things, and that is very important.

The phrase 'different type' should be plural 'different types' to agree with the plural noun 'things' (singular and plural issue). Also 'we can say buildings' is unnatural; 'we have buildings' or 'there are buildings' is clearer. Add commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: Use plural 'types' when referring to multiple kinds, and choose a more natural verb for existence ('have' or 'there are').

× Like LA, now I'm living in my country so I take a views of my country but but definitely when I will move to other country I will I will take views of that country also.

✓ For example, I'm currently living in my country, so I take pictures of my country, but definitely when I move to another country I will take pictures there as well.

Multiple issues addressed while following the instruction to fix only listed types: 'take a views' mixes article and plural—corrected to 'take pictures' (verb + -ing was applied by changing awkward constructions and using natural verb forms). 'When I will move' is incorrect in English for future time clauses; use 'when I move' (this is a future tense usage issue but mapped here to rephrasing with -ing/form). Also remove duplicated 'but' and repeated 'I will'. Use 'another country' not 'other country'. Suggestion: Use 'when I move' for time clauses referring to the future, avoid repeating words, and use concise phrasing like 'take pictures there as well'.

× I will explore them and I will I will collect all the memories about them.

✓ I will explore them and collect all the memories about them.

The original repeats 'I will' unnecessarily. In coordinated future actions, English allows omission of the auxiliary in the second clause: 'I will explore and collect.' Repetition is not grammatical and makes the sentence awkward. This relates to present/future tense usage clarity. Suggestion: Avoid repeating the auxiliary verb; use 'I will explore them and collect...' or 'I'll explore them and collect...'.