Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và cách diễn đạt tự nhiên: dùng danh từ số ít/ít nhiều đúng (a photo / photos, views), cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh từ thừa. Thêm một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và 1-2 chi tiết hỗ trợ bằng cách dùng liên từ (because, so) để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me capture special moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines when I travel.

Sugestão: Sửa lỗi từ vựng và trật tự từ: dùng động từ đúng (prefer), mạo từ và số (the countryside / rural areas), và cấu trúc so sánh (prefer X to Y). Thêm lý do cụ thể và một liên từ để nối ý (because, so).

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas to those in urban areas because the countryside is more peaceful and the air is much fresher. For instance, I like photographing green fields and quiet rivers.

Sugestão: Làm rõ chủ ngữ-động từ, dùng thì đúng và tránh lặp từ: nói "I prefer views in my own country"; giải thích lý do cụ thể với danh từ miêu tả (landscapes, landmarks) và ví dụ. Dùng liên từ để nối ý (because, for example).

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has diverse landscapes and many beautiful landmarks. For example, I enjoy photographing coastal cliffs and historic temples near my hometown.

× Oh yeah, taking photo of different view I think is so happy.

✓ Oh yeah, taking photos of different views makes me very happy.

Student used incorrect noun forms and sentence structure. 'taking' as gerund is OK but 'photo' should be plural 'photos' and 'different view' should be 'different views'. Need a subject-verb agreement: gerund phrase 'taking photos of different views' requires the verb 'makes' (third person singular). 'I think is so happy' is ungrammatical—replace with 'makes me very happy' to show cause and correct pronoun use. Suggestions: use plural nouns with general activities (photos, views), follow a gerund subject with a singular verb (makes), and express feelings with 'makes me happy' rather than 'is happy'.

× I refer view in rural area than the UR urban area because I think in rural area so beautiful and have fresh air.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas to urban areas because I think rural areas are beautiful and have fresh air.

Multiple preposition and word choice errors: 'refer' is wrong verb; correct verb is 'prefer'. Use 'prefer ... to ...' structure, not 'refer ... than'. 'view in rural area' should be plural and include articles or plural form: 'views in rural areas'. 'UR urban area' seems like typo; use 'urban areas'. The clause 'I think in rural area so beautiful and have fresh air' is missing verb forms: use 'I think rural areas are beautiful and have fresh air.' Suggestions: use 'prefer A to B', match plural forms when speaking generally, and include the verb 'are' for adjectives and 'have' for possession with plural subjects.

× I refer you in my own country.

✓ I prefer my own country.

The sentence uses wrong pronoun 'you' and wrong verb 'refer'. The intended meaning is 'I prefer my own country.' Remove unnecessary pronoun and correct verb. Suggestion: use 'prefer' followed by the noun or 'prefer X to Y' if comparing.

× In my country had a lot of view and is so very, very beautiful.

✓ My country has a lot of beautiful scenery and is very, very beautiful.

The original sentence lacks a proper subject-verb structure: 'In my country had' is incorrect—English needs an explicit subject and verb: 'My country has...'. 'a lot of view' should be 'a lot of views' or 'a lot of scenery'; 'is so very, very beautiful' is redundant—use 'is very, very beautiful'. Also keep consistent subjects: 'My country has... and is...'. Suggestions: start sentences with the subject, use correct verb forms ('has'), use plural or uncountable nouns appropriately ('scenery' or 'views'), and avoid redundant adverb stacking.