Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect grammar (use 'visit' → 'visiting', 'I like the nature' → 'I like nature'). Aim for varied vocabulary (scenery, landscapes) and one concrete example.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I love photographing natural landscapes such as forests and rivers because the lighting and colors change a lot, which makes each photo unique.

Sugestão: Clarify and correct word choice (remove 'using herbal'). Give a direct preference, then add 1–2 specific reasons connected by linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example'). Keep sentences natural and avoid filler words ('like' overused).

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I find architecture fascinating. For example, walking downtown and photographing skyscrapers and historic buildings excites me since their shapes and lights create dramatic photos.

Sugestão: Use correct tense and concise phrasing (say 'I prefer my own country' not 'preferred using'). Give a clear choice then explain with specific detail and a short example. Reduce repetition and avoid fillers.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country, especially the urban scenes. For instance, I enjoy photographing downtown at night because the illuminated buildings and streetlights produce striking contrasts in my photos.

× Of course I do like taking pictures of different views.

✓ Of course I like taking pictures of different views.

The original sentence uses 'do like' which is unnecessary emphatic form in a simple present context. Use the simple present 'I like' to match habitual preference and sound natural. Suggestion: remove the auxiliary 'do' unless emphasizing contrast or surprise.

× I like visit more different places and enjoy the views, especially the natural.

✓ I like visiting many different places and enjoying the views, especially natural ones.

After 'like' when describing habits, use the gerund (-ing) form: 'visiting' and 'enjoying'. 'More different places' is awkward; use 'many different places'. 'The natural' is incorrect noun usage; use 'natural ones' to refer to natural views.

× The natural views, the nature.

✓ Natural views and nature.

Repeated use of 'the' is unnecessary and incorrect here. 'The natural views' sounds specific; the student likely means general categories, so omit 'the'. Also 'the nature' is not standard; use 'nature' without an article.

× I like the nature.

✓ I like nature.

'Nature' is an uncountable noun when referring to the natural world, so it does not need the definite article 'the' in this general context.

× I like the green view, like maybe the tree, forest, whatever.

✓ I like green scenery, like trees and forests, for example.

'Green view' is an unnatural collocation; 'green scenery' or 'green views' is better. Use plural 'trees and forests' when speaking generally. 'Whatever' is informal and vague; replace with 'for example' or omit.

× I actually prefer using herbal urban areas.

✓ I actually prefer urban areas.

'Prefer using' is incorrect here; 'prefer' should be followed directly by the noun or gerund when meaning choice: 'prefer urban areas' or 'prefer living in urban areas'. 'Herbal' is wrong word choice; likely intended 'highly urban' or no modifier. Remove 'using' and 'herbal'.

× Like I like looking at architecture, like I think it's so interesting and I got excited when I see like big city views, like when you go downtown and strolling around the city, just walk around.

✓ I like looking at architecture; I think it's so interesting and I get excited when I see big city views, like when I go downtown and stroll around the city.

Several issues: tense and pronoun consistency—use present simple 'I get excited' and 'I see' for habitual actions. 'I got excited' is past and inconsistent. 'When you go downtown' improperly shifts to generic 'you'; better keep 'when I go downtown'. 'Strolling' should align with 'I stroll' (base form) after 'when I go downtown' or use gerund 'strolling' with parallel structure. Remove filler 'like' and unnecessary repetition.

× I think I preferred using my country, but I need to go downtown to see like the the urban, the urban views.

✓ I think I prefer my country, but I need to go downtown to see the urban views.

'Preferred' (past) is inconsistent with present preference; use present 'prefer'. 'Using my country' is incorrect; use 'my country'. Duplicate 'the' should be corrected; keep 'the urban views' to refer to specific city views.

× I like looking around like big buildings and architecture.

✓ I like looking at big buildings and architecture.

Use 'looking at' rather than 'looking around like'. 'Like' as filler is unnecessary. 'Architecture' pairs with 'looking at' to indicate observing structures.

× I think it's so beautiful at night, like the lights, so beautiful.

✓ I think it's so beautiful at night, especially with the lights.

Sentence structure and redundancy - use 'especially with the lights' to connect the idea smoothly. Tense is fine (present). Remove repetitive 'so beautiful' repetition for conciseness.