Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatical, concise and avoid fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Fix verb forms (landscapes, when I travel, I often photograph) and remove hesitations like "uh." Use linking words like "for example" correctly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different landscapes because I like exploring new places and capturing their atmosphere. For example, when I travel I often photograph mountains and coastal views to remember the colours and changing light.

Sugestão: Correct vocabulary and plurals, and avoid repetition. Begin with a clear statement, then give two specific reasons linked with connectors. Replace inaccurate words ("skinny") with "scenery" and use plural forms (fields, woodlands, streets).

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because the countryside has more varied and peaceful scenery, such as rolling hills, fields and small woodlands. As a result, I find these open spaces more relaxing than noisy city streets, so I often spend time outdoors at the weekend.

Sugestão: Avoid hesitation and be precise. Start with a direct answer (both / other countries), then give a clear preference and reasons with specific vocabulary. Replace awkward phrases ("I like the most is", "scenery... is optimistic") with concrete descriptions (dramatic mountains, pristine lakes).

Exemplo: I enjoy scenery in both my country and abroad, but I prefer visiting other countries like New Zealand and Switzerland. I especially like Switzerland because of its dramatic mountains, pristine lakes and well-preserved landscapes.

× 'Yes, I love taking pictures of different landscape because I love, uh, exploring new places and capturing the atmosphere.'

✓ 'Yes, I love taking pictures of different landscapes because I love exploring new places and capturing the atmosphere.'

'landscape' is countable here and should be plural to match 'different'; keep present simple 'love' since it describes a habitual preference. Suggestion: use plural nouns after 'different' when referring to multiple types.'

× 'For example, when I traveling, I often photographs mountains and coastal views to remember that colors and light.'

✓ 'For example, when I travel, I often photograph mountains and coastal views to remember their colors and light.'

'when I traveling' mixes forms; use base verb with 'when' (when I travel). 'Photographs' is third-person singular form but subject is 'I', so use 'photograph'. 'that colors' is incorrect reference; use possessive pronoun 'their' to link colors to the views.'

× 'Personally, I prefer views in rural areas because the countryside offers a more varied and peaceful skinny such as rolling hills, field and small Woodlands.'

✓ 'Personally, I prefer views in rural areas because the countryside offers a more varied and peaceful scenery such as rolling hills, fields and small woodlands.'

'skinny' is the wrong word; correct word is 'scenery' (uncountable). 'field' should be plural 'fields' to match examples and 'Woodlands' should be lowercase 'woodlands'. Ensure consistent plural forms when listing multiple features.'

× 'I find these open spaces more relaxing than a noisy city streets and I enjoy spending time outdoors there on weekends.'

✓ 'I find these open spaces more relaxing than noisy city streets, and I enjoy spending time outdoors there on weekends.'

'a noisy city streets' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'streets'; remove 'a' to match plural. Also add a comma before coordinating conjunction for clarity. Subject-verb agreement is maintained after correction.'

× 'Uh, both have their own views, but uh, I'll prefer to go New Zealand, uh, as well as Switzerland.'

✓ 'Uh, both have their own views, but I prefer to go to New Zealand as well as Switzerland.'

'I'll prefer' uses future form incorrectly for a general preference; use present simple 'I prefer'. Also add the preposition 'to' before country names: 'go to New Zealand'. Remove filler commas and 'uh' where possible for clarity.'

× 'But uh, I like the most is Switzerland because the scenery of Switzerland is optimistic.'

✓ 'But what I like most is Switzerland because Switzerland's scenery is beautiful.'

'I like the most is' is ungrammatical; use 'what I like most is' to introduce the subject. 'Scenery ... is optimistic' uses 'optimistic' (for people); use an adjective appropriate for scenery such as 'beautiful'. Alternatively 'is breathtaking' or 'is spectacular'. Also use possessive 'Switzerland's scenery' for conciseness.'