Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, ngắn gọn và tự nhiên. Tránh lặp từ (ví dụ “taking pictures” và “taking photos”), sửa ngữ pháp (chủ ngữ-động từ), và thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về loại cảnh bạn thích chụp để làm câu trả lời giàu thông tin hơn. Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu, dùng liên từ hợp lý.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy photographing different views. I usually choose scenic spots like beaches or mountain overlooks because I want to capture memories. I often share my best shots with friends on social media.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời hiện tại lộn xộn, nhiều lỗi phát âm/ngữ pháp và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh. Cần trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề (“I prefer rural areas”), sửa ngữ pháp (“I live in the countryside”), tránh từ không liên quan, và cung cấp 1–2 lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: không khí trong lành, phong cảnh tự nhiên). Dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “because of” để nối ý.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because I live in the countryside and enjoy peaceful natural scenery. The open fields and forests offer unique photo opportunities, especially during daylight when the light is soft.

Sugestão: Cần tránh tiếng lắp và từ sai (“wheels”, “How evil”). Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích lý do rõ ràng: nêu lợi thế khi chụp trong nước (quen thuộc, dễ tiếp cận) và thêm một ví dụ về nơi bạn muốn tới nước ngoài (Japan) với lý do cụ thể. Kết thúc câu hoàn chỉnh, không để dang dở.

Exemplo: I prefer photographing views in my own country because I know the landscapes well and feel comfortable exploring them. However, I would love to take photos in Japan one day because its scenery—such as cherry blossoms and mountainous coastlines—is very different and visually striking.

× Oh, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views or taking photos in my hobby or I usually choose a scenic or beautiful places because I want to capture memories and share them with friends.

✓ Oh, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views as a hobby, and I usually choose scenic or beautiful places because I want to capture memories and share them with friends.

The sentence uses incorrect or redundant adjective/adverb forms and article usage. 'in my hobby' is incorrect; use 'as a hobby'. 'a scenic or beautiful places' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'places' and repeats meaning; use 'scenic or beautiful places' without 'a'. Combine clauses with 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'as a hobby', remove 'a' before plural 'places', and connect phrases with appropriate conjunctions.

× To be a niece or I live in a countryside you can know the rural areas so of course I prefer views in rural areas and I usually take photos in days. I think open areas is has many beautiful veils but I.

✓ I live in the countryside, so of course I prefer views in rural areas and I usually take photos during the day. I think open areas have many beautiful views, but...

Multiple pronoun and noun phrase errors: 'To be a niece' is meaningless here and should be removed. Use 'the countryside' not 'a countryside'. 'you can know the rural areas' is incorrect pronoun usage and unnecessary. 'in days' should be 'during the day'. 'open areas is has' mixes verbs and agreement; use 'open areas have'. 'veils' is a wrong word form; use 'views'. Suggestion: remove irrelevant phrases, use correct definite article 'the', correct verb agreement and choose the intended noun 'views'.

× MMM I prefer wheels in my own country to those in other countries because I know the landscape well and they feel, uh, familiar and comfortable. How evil. I would love to take photographs in Japan one days because its scenery is breathtaking and very different from what I.

✓ I prefer views in my own country to those in other countries because I know the landscape well and they feel familiar and comfortable. I would love to take photographs in Japan one day because its scenery is breathtaking and very different from what I'm used to.

Pronoun and word choice errors: 'wheels' is incorrect; should be 'views'. 'they feel, uh, familiar' - remove filler and comma. 'one days' should be 'one day'. 'its' needs apostrophe handling but 'its' (possessive) is correct for 'scenery'. Final clause incomplete: add 'I'm used to' for clarity. Suggestion: use correct nouns ('views'), singular expressions ('one day'), and complete the comparative phrase 'what I'm used to'.