Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and gives an example, but it has some grammatical errors, slight redundancy, and awkward phrasing (e.g., “reveal the images,” “each locations”). To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (plural/singular, verb forms), avoid repeating ideas, and keep to 2–3 concise sentences. Add one specific detail (what kind of landscapes or a memorable scene) using a linking word to make it coherent.

Exemplo: Yes. I enjoy photographing different views because photos help me remember places I’ve visited. For example, when I travel I often take wide shots of mountain ranges or coastal sunsets to capture the atmosphere and colours, so I can look back and remember how the place felt.

Sugestão: The response communicates a preference but is repetitive, disfluent, and vague. Reduce hesitation (remove “uh”), avoid repeating the same idea, and provide a clear reason with a specific supporting detail. Use linking words (for example, because, so) correctly and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because I live in a busy city and rarely experience open landscapes. For example, I enjoy wide fields and quiet country roads that feel peaceful and offer fresh air, which is a contrast to the crowded city streets.

Sugestão: The answer shows preference but has grammar mistakes, unclear wording, and repetition (e.g., “there are there are,” “my countries,” “Rd. views”). Make a direct statement, correct nouns/verbs, and give a specific example of what you prefer abroad (e.g., beaches, mountains). Use one linking word to explain why.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because my country’s cities are dominated by high-rise buildings and crowded streets. For instance, I would like to visit coastal towns or mountain villages abroad to enjoy open beaches and scenic hiking trails.

× I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I like to keep photos as memories of the place I've visited.

✓ I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I like to keep photos as memories of the places I've visited.

The error is pluralization of 'place' when referring to multiple visits. This falls under incorrect use of noun number related to verb phrase context (present participle sentence), so use 'places' to agree with 'visits'. Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to more than one visit or location.

× For example, when I travel, I often photograph landscapes and later reveal the images to remember the atmosphere and details of each locations.

✓ For example, when I travel, I often photograph landscapes and later review the images to remember the atmosphere and details of each location.

Two issues: 'reveal' is incorrect verb choice; 'review' fits meaning. Also 'each locations' mixes singular 'each' with plural 'locations' — use singular 'location' after 'each'. This is a present participle/verb choice and number agreement issue. Suggestion: choose verbs that match intended meaning and ensure 'each' is followed by singular nouns.

× I prefer rural areas because in daily life I live in urban areas, so I can always uh, I'm living in urban areas so I can see the view all around.

✓ I prefer rural areas because in daily life I live in urban areas, so I can always see the view all around.

Redundant and inconsistent tense/structure: 'I live' and 'I'm living' both present but repetition and filler 'uh' disrupt fluency. Keep simple present 'I live' and remove extra clause. Suggestion: avoid repetition and fillers; use a single present-tense statement.

× So I would love to view.

✓ So I would love to visit rural areas to enjoy the views.

Original sentence is fragmentary and unclear: 'love to view' is unnatural and lacks object. This is a sentence structure/word choice problem. Provide a complete object and natural collocation 'visit rural areas to enjoy the views'. Suggestion: ensure verb has a clear object and use idiomatic expressions.

× What are preferred view in other countries?

✓ Do I prefer views in other countries?

The original is ungrammatical and uses wrong pronoun/word order for a question. It should match the Examiner's question and student's perspective: 'Do I prefer views in other countries?' This is a pronoun/structure issue. Suggestion: formulate yes/no questions with auxiliary 'do' and correct subject pronoun.

× Because in my countries there are there are all high rise buildings and people are packed.

✓ Because in my country there are many high-rise buildings and people are packed together.

Use singular 'country' when referring to one's own nation. Also 'all high rise buildings' is unnatural; use 'many high-rise buildings'. Repetition 'there are there are' must be removed. Suggestion: use correct singular/plural forms and avoid redundant repetition.

× So I would like to go to other country with Rd. views.

✓ So I would like to go to other countries with wide, open views.

'Other country' should be plural 'other countries' or 'another country'. 'Rd. views' is unclear/incorrect abbreviation. This is sentence structure and word choice error. 'Wide, open views' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: use complete words instead of abbreviations and correct singular/plural choices.