Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be careful with grammar and make your answer more concise and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, fix tense and article errors (e.g. “I have never seen”), and give one specific detail about what made the view interesting. Use a linking word to connect the example to the topic sentence.

Exemplo: Yes, I love photographing different views because they reveal new perspectives I hadn’t noticed before. For example, when I photographed Tokyo Tower from below, the diagonal lines of its steelwork created a dramatic pattern that showed how the architects balanced form and function.

Sugestão: Make the response more natural and avoid repetition. Provide a short topic sentence, then support it with one specific reason and an example. Replace vague phrases like “more creativity” with concrete descriptions (e.g. contrasts, shapes, colors). Use a linking word such as “because” or “for example.”

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because the variety of buildings and street scenes gives me more creative options. For example, I often frame a modern glass tower against an old brick facade to highlight contrasts in texture and color.

Sugestão: Improve grammatical accuracy and add a brief explanation of why foreign views appeal to you. Make the example more descriptive and link it to the general preference. Avoid vague words like “incredible” without detail.

Exemplo: I prefer views from other countries because they expose me to landscapes and cultures I don’t see at home. For instance, when I visited Yosemite in the United States, the towering granite cliffs and vast waterfalls offered dramatic scenes that inspired me to try new photographic compositions.

× 'it gives me perspectives that I never seen before.'

✓ 'it gives me perspectives that I have never seen before.'

'Never seen' is missing the auxiliary verb for the present perfect; the speaker refers to experiences up to now, so use present perfect (have/has + past participle). Suggestion: use "have never seen" to connect past experience with the present.'

× 'For example, I took a picture from the Tokyo Tower that is located in Tokyo and it gave me a perspective.'

✓ 'For example, I took a picture from Tokyo Tower, which is located in Tokyo, and it gave me a new perspective.'

'Tokyo Tower' does not require the definite article "the" in English proper names in this context; also "which" is a more natural relative pronoun for additional information. The phrase "a perspective" is vague; "a new perspective" is clearer. Suggestion: omit "the" before proper names like Tokyo Tower and use "which" for non-restrictive clauses.'

× 'That's how the people constructed the tower.'

✓ 'It showed me how the people constructed the tower.'

The original sentence "That's how the people constructed the tower" is a fragment in context and does not clearly connect to the previous idea. Using "It showed me how..." clarifies that the picture or view revealed the construction process. Suggestion: add a clear subject (it) and a verb (showed) to link ideas.'

× 'I prefer views in urban areas because when I take pictures I have more creativity.'

✓ 'I prefer views in urban areas because when I take pictures I am more creative.'

'Have more creativity' is awkward in this context; English speakers usually say "be more creative." The present simple "am" fits habitual actions. Suggestion: use "I am more creative" when describing a personal quality or state during an activity.'

× 'This is because I can choose what buildings to fit in my picture and what buildings not to.'

✓ 'This is because I can choose which buildings to include in my picture and which buildings not to include.'

'Choose what buildings to fit in my picture' is unidiomatic. Use "choose which buildings to include" and repeat the verb for the contrast or use "which ones not to include." Also use "which" rather than "what" when selecting among specific items. Suggestion: use "include" for objects placed within a frame and repeat the verb in the second clause for clarity.'

× 'I prefer views from other countries.'

✓ 'I prefer views in other countries.'

'From other countries' is understandable but not the most natural collocation with "views" in this context. Use "views in other countries" to indicate scenes located within those countries. Suggestion: use preposition "in" with "views."

× 'This is because when I visited America, I managed to go to Yosemite National Park and the views there were incredible.'

✓ 'This is because when I visited America, I visited Yosemite National Park and the views there were incredible.'

'Managed to go to' implies difficulty or effort and is unnecessary unless that meaning is intended. Use the simple past "visited" to describe past events. Suggestion: keep verbs parallel and straightforward when listing past activities.'