Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid repetition, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I like photographing landscapes at midday because the clouds create interesting shapes and contrast in the sky. Also, shooting indoors of unusual architecture makes me happy because the details and patterns are visually striking.

Sugestão: Answer directly, fix vocabulary and grammar, and add specific reasons using linking words. Limit to three sentences and avoid vague phrases.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones. This is because the countryside is peaceful and I can concentrate on composing shots without traffic or crowds. Moreover, natural scenes often offer clearer light and interesting textures, such as fields or rivers.

Sugestão: Be concise and coherent: state a clear preference (or say you like both), correct grammar, and provide a specific example or condition using linking words. Keep under four sentences.

Exemplo: I enjoy views in both my country and abroad. For instance, when I have a long holiday I travel abroad to photograph new landscapes, but when I have only a short break I explore locations at home because they are more convenient and familiar.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views like in this inside of some bizarre and the middle of the day because it makes me happy because there are different type of clouds on the sky.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, for example indoors and in the middle of the day, because it makes me happy when there are different types of clouds in the sky.

The sentence has several adjective/adverb and word-choice issues: 'this inside of some bizarre' is incorrect phrasing and should be 'indoors' or 'inside'; 'in the middle of the day' is fine but needed punctuation; 'different type' should be plural 'different types'; 'on the sky' is incorrect preposition use - it should be 'in the sky'. Also redundant 'because' was simplified. Suggestion: use clearer noun phrases and correct prepositions; break long sentences with commas.

× I prefer use in local areas because in additional areas everything is peaceful and at the time concentrate on my camera and environment is so cool as compared to urban area because there is no any vehicle.

✓ I prefer places in rural areas because in those areas everything is peaceful and I can concentrate on my camera; the environment is much nicer compared to urban areas because there are no vehicles.

Multiple preposition and structure errors: 'prefer use in local areas' is incorrect; use 'prefer places in rural areas' or 'prefer rural areas'. 'in additional areas' is unclear; likely 'in those areas' or 'in rural areas'. 'at the time' should be 'I can' or 'at that time I can'. 'no any vehicle' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'no vehicles' or 'not any vehicles'. Suggestion: choose correct prepositions ('in', 'compared to') and use plural nouns for countability.

× I prefer both views in my country or in another nations because if I have some holidays in my enterprise so at that time I try for other countries views and if I don't have any long holidays so at that time I prefer my own contributes.

✓ I prefer views both in my country and in other countries because if I have a holiday from work I try to visit other countries, and if I don't have long holidays I prefer to stay in my own country.

Pronoun and noun choice errors: 'another nations' mixes singular and plural; use 'other countries'. 'some holidays in my enterprise' is incorrect noun choice and preposition; 'holiday from work' or 'time off' is appropriate. 'try for other countries views' should be 'try to visit other countries' or 'see views in other countries'. 'my own contributes' is incorrect; should be 'my own country'. Suggestion: use correct pronouns ('other countries'), correct noun phrases, and appropriate verbs ('visit', 'stay').