Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and natural: give a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details. Avoid tense or article errors and redundant phrases. Use linking words (e.g., because, so) and correct small grammar (e.g., "templates", "different views").

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos because I edit videos and like to create my own templates, so I often shoot different views to have more material to work with.

Sugestão: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give a specific reason and a short example. Avoid informal fillers (e.g., "kind of", "wanna") and vague phrases. Use a linking word like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because the architecture and lighting create a cinematic atmosphere, so I can capture dramatic scenes for my edits, for example, busy streets at dusk.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer, clarify what you mean by "resources", and avoid self-correction mid-sentence. Provide a specific detail or example about the Philippines to support your preference. Keep it concise and coherent.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because living in the Philippines gives me easy access to diverse landscapes, such as beaches and mountains, so I can shoot frequently and explore different styles.

× Yes, because I love video editing and I needed a lot of template to use and that's why I'm taking pictures in a different views.

✓ Yes, because I love video editing and I need a lot of templates to use, so that's why I take pictures of different views.

Errors: 'needed' (past) conflicts with present reason; 'template' should be plural 'templates'; 'in a different views' is incorrect preposition and article use. Use present simple 'need' to state a general fact, plural 'templates' to match 'a lot of', and 'take pictures of different views' is the correct collocation. Suggestions: Use present simple for habitual facts, ensure noun-number agreement, and use 'of' with 'pictures' to indicate the subject being photographed.

× I prefer to take pictures in urban areas because I love cinematic film and that's why I kind of feel like I wanna take pictures there.

✓ I prefer to take pictures in urban areas because I love cinematic films, and that's why I kind of feel like I want to take pictures there.

Errors: 'cinematic film' should be plural 'cinematic films' when speaking generally; 'wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in this context. 'Kind of feel like I want to' keeps the present-tense preference. Suggestions: Use standard forms in formal speech, pluralize when referring generally to a category, and avoid slang contractions like 'wanna'.

× I prefer views in my own country as I live here in the Philippines. We have a lot of resources, not I mean natural resources. That's why I prefer it here.

✓ I prefer views in my own country since I live in the Philippines. We have a lot of natural resources, which is why I prefer it here.

Errors: 'as I live here in the Philippines' is wordy; 'not I mean natural resources' is ungrammatical and unclear; 'That's why I prefer it here' has vague pronoun 'it' (better 'the Philippines' or keep 'here'). Use 'since' for reason, replace the broken phrase with 'natural resources', and clarify pronoun reference. Suggestions: Use clear connectors for reasons ('since', 'because'), avoid mid-sentence self-corrections, and ensure pronouns clearly refer to a noun previously mentioned.