Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngôn ngữ tự nhiên và mạch lạc: tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp; trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ (for example, because, so) hợp lý và dùng từ vựng phù hợp (scenery, scenes, landscapes) thay vì lặp 'views' và 'pretty'.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different landscapes. I especially like capturing colorful sunsets and interesting cityscapes because they create strong moods and memories. For example, when I visit a new place I try to photograph both wide shots and close-up details to show its character.

Sugestão: Trả lời rõ ràng hơn và sửa ngữ pháp, nói cụ thể về điểm khác biệt giữa hai lựa chọn. Dùng linking words (because, however, also) để kết nối ý, và tránh lỗi số ít/số nhiều (the rural area is/are). Thêm ví dụ cụ thể về hoạt động bạn làm ở nông thôn.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and have cleaner air and water, which I find relaxing. For example, I enjoy fishing on calm lakes and photographing coastal scenery there, whereas cities often feel too crowded and noisy for that kind of activity.

Sugestão: Cần sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản và ý chính: nói rõ 'my country' vs 'other countries'. Tránh lỗi từ (wheels → views) và cấu trúc sai ('I'm have', 'not have the exciting'). Nên mở đầu bằng câu trực tiếp (I prefer...), giải thích lý do cụ thể (new cultures, different architecture) và cho một ví dụ ngắn.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new cultures and sights that I haven't seen before. For instance, traveling abroad lets me photograph different styles of architecture and unusual landscapes, which feels more exciting than familiar local scenes.

× I like taking pictures of this fun views because I like the beautiful views and the pretty picture.

✓ I like taking pictures of these fun views because I like the beautiful views and the pretty pictures.

'This' is singular while 'views' is plural; use 'these' for plural. Also 'picture' should be plural to match the general statement about liking pictures. Improve by matching determiner number to the noun and keeping consistency when speaking about multiple items. Tips: check whether the noun is singular or plural and choose 'this/these' accordingly; keep noun plurality consistent.

× So I like taking pictures when I go to the new places and yes, it's.

✓ So I like taking pictures when I go to new places.

The original ends with an incomplete clause 'and yes, it's' which is a sentence fragment and unclear. Remove the fragment to make a complete sentence. Tip: avoid leaving unfinished clauses; if you want to add emphasis, use 'and yes' followed by a complete idea, e.g., 'and yes, I enjoy it.'

× I think I prefer the rural areas because I like the clean ocean, the environment and the peaceful places.

✓ I think I prefer rural areas because I like the clean ocean, the environment, and peaceful places.

Using 'the rural areas' and then listing general preferences is awkward; omit 'the' for general statements. Also 'peaceful places' does not need 'the'. Use commas for lists. Tip: for general preferences, use plural noun without 'the'.

× And I like fishing and I think the rural areas is very, very like for fishing.

✓ And I like fishing, and I think rural areas are very good for fishing.

'Rural areas' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'Very, very like for fishing' is incorrect phrasing; use 'very good for fishing.' Tip: ensure verb agrees with plural subjects and choose appropriate adjective phrases.

× I think I prefer the wheels in other countries because I'm have a long time in my old country so I'm not have the exciting of this I and the act like I like to traveling in the other countries.

✓ I think I prefer the views in other countries because I have spent a long time in my home country, so I am not excited by it anymore and I like traveling to other countries.

Multiple errors: 'wheels' is wrong word; likely 'views'. 'I'm have' and 'I'm not have' misuse auxiliary verbs—should be 'I have spent' or 'I have been in' and 'I am not excited'. Tense and verb forms incorrect for present perfect. 'the exciting of this I and the act like I like to traveling' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'not excited by it anymore and I like traveling to other countries.' Tips: use correct vocabulary ('views'), correct auxiliary verbs, and use present perfect to indicate duration ('have spent'); use 'excited by' and 'traveling to'.