Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Work on grammar, sentence structure and clarity. Give a clear topic sentence, then one or two concise supporting details with correct verb forms and countable/uncountable nouns. Use linking words (for example, because) and avoid redundancy. Also vary vocabulary (photos, images, snapshots) and keep responses within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of different views. For example, when I traveled around Europe, I often took more than a hundred photos a day because the scenery and architecture were so beautiful. I enjoy capturing both wide landscapes and small details to remember the trip.

Sugestão: Improve coherence and vocabulary accuracy. Start with a clear preference or say you have no strong preference, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (because, however). Correct basic grammar (it depends, I like both rural and urban areas) and use appropriate words (urban = city, rural = countryside, atmosphere).

Exemplo: It depends on the location, but I generally enjoy both rural and urban views. For example, the countryside offers peaceful landscapes and natural beauty, while cities provide interesting architecture and scenes of daily life, so I often photograph both for different reasons.

Sugestão: Avoid vague negative statements and be more specific. State your preference directly, then give clear reasons and examples. Fix grammar (views in my country, other countries) and avoid confusing phrases (nature of the urban areas). Use linking words (because, for example) and provide one specific detail about why Europe appeals to you.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries, especially in Europe. For example, I find European cities charming because of their historic buildings and lively street scenes, and I also enjoy the varied natural landscapes there, which give me many interesting subjects to photograph.

× I like taking picture especially when I going to the travel trip.

✓ I like taking pictures, especially when I am going on a trip.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'taking' and general activity. The verb phrase 'I going' is missing the auxiliary 'am' for present continuous. Use 'going on a trip' not 'going to the travel trip' because 'on a trip' is the common collocation and 'travel trip' is redundant. Suggestion: use 'I am going on a trip' or 'when I travel.'

× For example, there's a time that I went to Europe and I took a lot of photo estimate like for more than 100 image per day.

✓ For example, when I went to Europe I took a lot of photos, about more than 100 images per day.

'a time that' is awkward; 'when I went' is correct. 'photo' and 'image' should be plural ('photos', 'images'). 'estimate like' is incorrect; use 'about' or 'an estimated' to indicate approximation. Also place quantifiers before the noun and simplify: 'about 100 images per day' or 'more than 100 images per day.'

× So it's quite a lot and I really enjoy.

✓ So that's quite a lot, and I really enjoyed it.

The original mixes present and past references; since the speaker referred to a past trip, use past tense 'enjoyed it.' 'I really enjoy' without object is incomplete here; add 'it' or match tense. Also 'So that's quite a lot' is clearer than 'it's' because referring back to the number of photos.

× I could say that it's depend on the location.

✓ I could say that it depends on the location.

The verb 'depend' requires third person singular agreement 'depends' with subject 'it.' This fits the present general statement. 'It's' + verb must be 'it depends.'

× Uh, actually I like board the rural area and the urban area 'cause it's the person different irastation the city also provide like the life of the people, while the urban area have a lot of nature.

✓ Actually, I like both rural and urban areas because they are personally different: the city also shows people's lives, while rural areas have a lot of nature.

Many issues: 'board' should be 'both.' 'the rural area and the urban area' better as 'rural and urban areas.' 'It's the person different irastation' is unclear and likely intended as 'they are personally different' or 'they are quite different.' Use plural pronoun 'they' to match plural subject. 'the city also provide' needs subject-verb agreement 'the city provides' or rephrased 'the city shows.' 'urban area have' should be 'rural areas have' or 'urban areas' depending on meaning; here corrected to 'rural areas have a lot of nature.' Suggestion: keep parallel structure and correct pronouns and agreement.

× My view in my country is not that nice, so I could say that I prefer the view on other country, especially in Europe, because I travel a lot there and I like the nature of the urban areas, the city, the people and everything.

✓ The views in my country are not that nice, so I prefer the views in other countries, especially in Europe, because I travel there a lot and I like the nature, the cities, the people and everything.

'View' should be plural 'views' when speaking generally. 'Prefer the view on other country' is incorrect: use 'prefer the views in other countries.' Word order 'travel a lot there' is better as 'travel there a lot.' 'the nature of the urban areas, the city, the people' is awkward; simplify to 'the nature, the cities, the people.' Maintain plural consistency and natural collocations.