Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (e.g., “umm”), correct collocations (e.g., “standing views” is unnatural), and limit to 2–4 sentences. Add one specific detail about what you enjoy photographing and why to make the answer more vivid.

Exemplo: Yes — I love photographing scenic views. I particularly enjoy capturing mountain sunsets and city skylines because the light and colors change quickly. I often edit the photos for a clean, aesthetic look and share them on Pinterest.

Sugestão: Respond with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Avoid awkward phrasing like “feel myself more passionate and more better” — use natural expressions (e.g., “I feel more inspired” or “I enjoy the atmosphere more”).

Exemplo: I prefer urban views, especially in Almaty, because the city skyline and evening lights are striking. For example, watching the sunset over the mountains from a rooftop makes me feel inspired and energetic.

Sugestão: Start with a direct statement, then give specific examples and a reason. Avoid absolute comparisons like “I even can't compare”; instead explain what makes your country special. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and correct collocations (use “scenic” or “spectacular” instead of “standing”).

Exemplo: I prefer the views in my own country because we have spectacular mountain ranges and natural attractions. For example, the nearby peaks and valleys offer unique landscapes that make me feel proud and happy when I visit them.

× I really love taking pictures of standing and breathtaking views in different ways because umm, I really love doing any aesthetic photos and just publish them for Pinterest and other social medias.

✓ I really love taking pictures of stunning and breathtaking views in different ways because I enjoy creating aesthetic photos and publishing them on Pinterest and other social media platforms.

Use of 'standing' is incorrect to describe views; 'stunning' or 'scenic' is appropriate (adjective choice). 'Doing any aesthetic photos' is ungrammatical: use 'creating aesthetic photos'. Also 'publish' should be 'publishing' to match the gerund phrase after 'enjoy'/'because I enjoy'. Use 'social media platforms' instead of 'social medias'. Suggestions: replace 'standing' with 'stunning' or 'scenic', use gerunds consistently, and use the uncountable noun 'social media' or 'social media platforms'.

× I really love taking pictures of standing and breathtaking views in different ways because umm, I really love doing any aesthetic photos and just publish them for Pinterest and other social medias.

✓ I really love taking pictures of stunning and breathtaking views in different ways because I enjoy creating aesthetic photos and publishing them on Pinterest and other social media platforms.

Preposition 'for' is not idiomatic with 'publish' here; use 'on Pinterest'. Also 'in different ways' is acceptable but 'using different techniques' could be clearer. Suggestion: use 'publishing them on Pinterest' and 'other social media platforms'.

× However, I love rural areas too. But in urban areas, I feel myself more passionate and more better.

✓ However, I love rural areas too. But in urban areas, I feel more passionate and better.

'I feel myself' is incorrect; use 'I feel' (no reflexive pronoun). 'More better' is redundant and ungrammatical: 'better' alone or 'more passionate' is fine. Suggestion: remove 'myself' and choose either 'more passionate' or 'better' depending on meaning, or combine as 'more passionate and happier'.

× I even can't compare other countries with my because we have a lot of breathtaking and standing views in our country, especially our mountains and other attractions.

✓ I can't even compare other countries with mine because we have a lot of breathtaking and scenic views in our country, especially our mountains and other attractions.

Use 'mine' as the possessive pronoun, not 'my'. Also word order: 'even' is better after 'can't' as 'can't even'. 'Standing' is incorrect adjective for views; use 'scenic'. Suggestion: use correct possessive pronoun 'mine' and reposition 'even' for natural emphasis.