Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more fluent, grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details linked with connectors. Avoid repetition and filler words. Also fix verb forms and word order (e.g., “I enjoy taking pictures” not “enjoy to take”).

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I visit a scenic landscape I like to photograph the wide vistas and interesting landmarks so I can remember the trip. Also, these photos help me share the experience with friends and family.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and then contrast the two choices with specific reasons, using linking words (e.g., "on the one hand", "on the other hand"). Reduce hesitations and correct grammar (plural forms, verb tense).

Exemplo: I prefer both urban and rural views for different reasons. On the one hand, urban scenery appeals to me because it is convenient and full of interesting buildings and street life. On the other hand, I enjoy rural views for their fresh air, open fields and wildlife, so I like both depending on my mood.

Sugestão: Make a concise direct statement and give a clear reason with a specific example. Avoid repeating phrases and filler words. Use comparative language correctly (e.g., "I prefer views in other countries because they feel more novel").

Exemplo: I usually prefer views in other countries because they feel more novel and different from my everyday surroundings. For instance, seeing historic European architecture or a desert landscape abroad gives me a fresh perspective compared to familiar places in Taiwan.

× Of course, when I visit any landscape, I really enjoy to take a picture with the magnificent view or some special place because I when I take the picture with them, it's recalled I travel where I travel.

✓ Of course, when I visit a landscape, I really enjoy taking pictures of magnificent views or special places because when I take pictures of them, they remind me of the places I have traveled to.

The verb 'enjoy' must be followed by a gerund (-ing) not an infinitive, so 'enjoy to take' should be 'enjoy taking'. Also use plural 'pictures' and 'views' for general activities. Replace 'it's recalled I travel where I travel' with 'they remind me of the places I have traveled to' to use correct tense and clear expression. Suggestion: use 'enjoy' + gerund and match singular/plural nouns to the intended meaning.

× Of course, when I visit any landscape, I really enjoy to take a picture with the magnificent view or some special place because I when I take the picture with them, it's recalled I travel where I travel.

✓ Of course, when I visit a landscape, I really enjoy taking pictures of magnificent views or special places because when I take pictures of them, they remind me of the places I have traveled to.

'Any landscape' and 'a picture' are awkward here; 'a landscape' or no article with plural is better. Use 'taking pictures of magnificent views' rather than 'take a picture with the magnificent view'. Ensure articles agree with countability: 'a landscape' for one, or plural 'landscapes' for general. Suggestion: choose singular with 'a' or use plurals consistently.

× Of course, when I visit any landscape, I really enjoy to take a picture with the magnificent view or some special place because I when I take the picture with them, it's recalled I travel where I travel.

✓ Of course, when I visit a landscape, I really enjoy taking pictures of magnificent views or special places because when I take pictures of them, they remind me of the places I have traveled to.

The original sentence is run-on and contains unclear clauses like 'because I when I take the picture with them'. Reorganize: main clause 'I enjoy taking pictures' and subordinate clause 'because when I take pictures of them, they remind me...' Make clauses clear and remove repeated words. Suggestion: break long sentences into clear parts and keep subject-verb-object order.

× Actually I enjoy both area.

✓ Actually, I enjoy both areas.

The phrase 'both area' is incorrect because 'both' requires a plural noun. Use 'both areas' to indicate two types (urban and rural). Suggestion: when using 'both' ensure the following noun is plural.

× When I visit urban area, I can go anywhere conveniently and if I went to the if I go to a rural area, I I can enjoy the uh, natural like fresh air and animal or something.

✓ When I visit urban areas, I can go anywhere conveniently, and if I go to a rural area, I can enjoy natural things like fresh air and animals.

Use plural 'urban areas' for general meaning or 'the urban area' with 'the' for a specific area. Remove extra filler words and repeated fragments. 'the natural like fresh air and animal' is ungrammatical; rephrase as 'natural things like fresh air and animals'. Suggestion: choose plural for general statements and list examples clearly.

× When I visit urban area, I can go anywhere conveniently and if I went to the if I go to a rural area, I I can enjoy the uh, natural like fresh air and animal or something.

✓ When I visit urban areas, I can go anywhere conveniently, and if I go to a rural area, I can enjoy natural things like fresh air and animals.

The original mixes tenses 'if I went' and 'if I go'. For general present habits, use present tense 'if I go'. Suggestion: keep conditional/habitual statements in present simple when describing general preferences.

× Therefore I prefer both views.

✓ Therefore, I prefer both kinds of views.

'Both views' is understandable but slightly awkward; adding 'kinds of' clarifies that two types are meant (urban and rural). No gerund issue here but improvement suggested for clarity. Suggestion: add a clarifying noun like 'kinds' when referring to two categories.

× In fact, I enjoy other countries view because although Taiwan's view is very is good, is very good too, but is a normal life to me, so it's nothing special when in uh, when I saw anything.

✓ In fact, I enjoy views in other countries because although Taiwan's scenery is very good too, it is normal to me, so nothing seems special when I see it.

Use 'views in other countries' or 'other countries' views' with correct possession. 'Taiwan's view' is unnatural; 'Taiwan's scenery' or 'views in Taiwan' is better. Remove repeated 'is very is good' and use 'it is' for clarity. 'when I saw anything' should be 'when I see it' to match present general statement. Suggestion: use appropriate nouns (scenery) and maintain consistent tense.

× In fact, I enjoy other countries view because although Taiwan's view is very is good, is very good too, but is a normal life to me, so it's nothing special when in uh, when I saw anything.

✓ In fact, I enjoy views in other countries because although Taiwan's scenery is very good too, it is normal to me, so nothing seems special when I see it.

The sentence mixes tenses and uses past 'saw' where present 'see' is appropriate for general preferences. Use present simple 'see' and 'is' for habitual or general truths. Suggestion: keep tense consistent when describing general opinions or habitual experiences.

× Therefore I I prefer other countries feel more.

✓ Therefore, I prefer the feeling of other countries more.

The original 'I prefer other countries feel more' is ungrammatical: 'feel' is misused and the pronoun/reference is unclear. Rephrase to 'I prefer the feeling of other countries' or 'I prefer how other countries feel' to convey preference for the atmosphere. Suggestion: restructure sentence to use 'the feeling of' or 'how ... feels' to express preference.