Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms (e.g., 'memories', 'mood', 'take photos').

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I photograph landscapes I practice composition and camera settings, which improves my skills; also, looking at these photos later often lifts my mood and brings back happy memories.

Sugestão: Give a direct preference or clearly explain the conditional choice. Use linking words (however, although, therefore) and provide a specific example of what you photograph in each setting. Correct small errors (e.g., 'types of pictures', 'heritage sites').

Exemplo: It depends on where I am, but I usually prefer rural views because I like photographing traditional houses and heritage sites. However, in cities I focus on modern architecture and street scenes to capture the urban atmosphere.

Sugestão: Answer directly and avoid vague phrases. State a clear preference or say you like both, then give specific reasons with correct vocabulary (e.g., 'mood', 'learn about their culture', 'meet new people'). Use cohesive linking words ('for example', 'also').

Exemplo: I enjoy photographing views both at home and abroad, but I especially like photos from other countries. For example, foreign landscapes and street life offer new cultural details and colors that inspire me and help me learn about different traditions; I also often meet local photographers and exchange tips.

× Certainly yes, I'd love to take the pictures of different views because by this I can easily enhance my clicking the pictures, photographs as well as different skills.

✓ Certainly, I'd love to take pictures of different views because doing so helps me improve my photography and related skills.

The original uses awkward noun phrases and incorrect gerund forms ('enhance my clicking the pictures'). Use the gerund 'doing so' or 'taking pictures' to indicate the action. Also remove unnecessary articles ('the pictures' -> 'pictures') and streamline 'photographs as well as different skills' to 'photography and related skills' for clarity.

× Moreover, by clicking the photographs I can easily rejuvenate myself as I can recall my all those membranes.

✓ Moreover, by taking photographs I can easily rejuvenate myself because I can recall all those memories.

The sentence uses incorrect noun 'membranes' (should be 'memories') and incorrect word order 'my all those'. Use 'all those memories' or 'my memories'. Also prefer 'taking photographs' rather than 'clicking' in formal responses.

× Moreover, by taking different type of picture we can I can change my mode from sad to happy.

✓ Moreover, by taking different types of pictures I can change my mood from sad to happy.

Number agreement errors: 'different type of picture' should be plural 'different types of pictures'. Also 'mode' is incorrect for emotional state—use 'mood'. Remove extra pronoun 'we' and ensure subject matches verb ('I can').

× Well, it depends upon the situation.

✓ Well, it depends on the situation.

Both 'depend on' and 'depend upon' are possible, but 'depends on' is more natural here. Keep preposition simple for spoken English.

× Whenever I am in urban areas, I prefer to have different type of pictures of the urban views.

✓ Whenever I am in urban areas, I prefer to take different types of pictures of urban views.

Use plural 'types' and 'pictures' for consistency. Also change 'have' to the more appropriate verb 'take' when referring to photographs, and remove redundant 'the' before 'urban views'.

× On the another hand, if I talk about the rural areas.

✓ On the other hand, if I talk about rural areas, ...

'On the another hand' is incorrect; use 'on the other hand'. The original is a sentence fragment ending with a period; it should be completed or connected to the next clause with a comma.

× So when I am in the village or town, I prefer to click the photos of those views which are related to our heritage as by learning about them we can easily enhance our knowledge.

✓ When I am in a village or small town, I prefer to take photos of views related to our heritage, because learning about them enhances our knowledge.

Use 'a village or small town' for natural phrasing. Replace 'click' with 'take' for formality. The original has a long clumsy subordinate clause; split and use 'because learning about them enhances our knowledge' for clarity and correct verb form.

× Well it depend upon the situation if we are visiting another country or like cities we can easily click the photographs of that scenes.

✓ Well, it depends on the situation: if we are visiting another country or different cities, we can take photographs of those scenes.

Subject-verb agreement ('it depend' -> 'it depends') and preposition choice ('depends on'). 'Like cities' is informal and unclear—use 'different cities'. 'Click the photographs' -> 'take photographs'. 'That scenes' -> 'those scenes' for plural demonstrative.

× Because by clicking the photographs of different type of views which are outside of our city, we can easily like rejuvenate ourselves, we can uplift our moon.

✓ By taking photographs of different types of views outside our city, we can easily rejuvenate ourselves and lift our mood.

'adjective/adverb errors and word choice': 'different type' -> 'different types'; remove filler 'like'; 'uplift our moon' is incorrect—should be 'lift our mood'. Also avoid starting sentences with 'Because' as a fragment; integrate into a complete sentence.

× Moreover we can easily get to know about their culture and we can hook up with new people.

✓ Moreover, we can learn about their culture and meet new people.

'Get to know about' is awkward—use 'learn about'. 'Hook up with new people' is informal and can imply dating; use 'meet new people' for neutral, appropriate phrasing.