Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and avoid filler words (uh, uh). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct verb forms (I love taking pictures) and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph scenic landscapes and cityscapes when I travel, and I like to pose in my favorite outfits to capture memorable moments.

Sugestão: Directly state your preference in one sentence, then give specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (prefer taking; lighting) and avoid vague phrases like "many" without a noun.

Exemplo: I prefer taking pictures in urban areas because they offer diverse architecture and vibrant street scenes. For instance, the city lights and modern buildings create interesting compositions and contrast at night.

Sugestão: Give a clear, grammatical answer (e.g., I enjoy both my country and other countries) and then explain with a specific contrast using linking words like "because" or "while." Avoid repetition and unfinished sentences.

Exemplo: I enjoy taking pictures both in my own country and abroad because each place offers unique scenes. For example, at home I capture familiar cultural festivals, while in other countries I photograph different landscapes and architectural styles that I don't see at home.

× Yes, it's a big yes to my uh, to taking pictures of the different views because I love to taking pictures, uh, in the beautiful views, uh, and in the beautiful poses, uh, with my favorite, uh, with, with wearing with my favorite clothes and I just love.

✓ Yes, it's a big yes for me to taking pictures of different views because I love taking pictures in beautiful locations and in beautiful poses while wearing my favorite clothes and I just love it.

The student incorrectly uses 'to taking' after expressions that require either the gerund alone or the infinitive. Use 'love taking' (gerund) or 'for me to take' (infinitive). Also remove redundant articles and filler words. Suggestion: use 'love taking pictures' or 'I love to take pictures' and end with an object or pronoun (it) for completeness.

× Yes, it's a big yes to my uh, to taking pictures of the different views because I love to taking pictures, uh, in the beautiful views, uh, and in the beautiful poses, uh, with my favorite, uh, with, with wearing with my favorite clothes and I just love.

✓ Yes, it's a big yes for me to taking pictures of different views because I love taking pictures in beautiful locations and in beautiful poses while wearing my favorite clothes and I just love it.

The original uses incorrect or redundant prepositions: 'to my' should be 'for me', 'in the beautiful views' is wrong — we say 'of different views' or 'in beautiful locations', and 'with wearing' is incorrect; use 'while wearing'. Suggestion: replace 'to my' with 'for me', 'in the beautiful views' with 'in beautiful locations', and 'with wearing' with 'while wearing'.

× Yes, I prefer to taking pictures in the urban areas because in the urban areas there are very beautiful views out there and, uh, beautiful views out there with the, uh, lightning and many.

✓ Yes, I prefer taking pictures in urban areas because there are very beautiful views there with the lighting and more.

After 'prefer' use the gerund ('prefer taking') or the infinitive without 'to' ('prefer to take'). 'Prefer to taking' is incorrect. Also 'out there' is redundant; use 'there'. 'Lightning' is a wrong word for light; use 'lighting'. Suggestion: use 'I prefer taking pictures in urban areas' and simplify the sentence.

× Yes, I prefer to taking pictures in the urban areas because in the urban areas there are very beautiful views out there and, uh, beautiful views out there with the, uh, lightning and many.

✓ Yes, I prefer taking pictures in urban areas because there are very beautiful views there with the lighting and more.

Redundant and incorrect prepositional phrases: 'in the urban areas' is better as 'in urban areas' and 'out there' is unnecessary. Also 'with the lighting and many' is unclear; use 'with the lighting and more' or specify items. Suggestion: remove redundant prepositions and clarify nouns.

× Yes, I love to take pictures and capturing the moments in my country in in my country as well as in the other countries. Also because they in other countries, there are very different views with with different views and the.

✓ Yes, I love to take pictures and capture moments in my country as well as in other countries because there are very different views there.

Mixing infinitive and gerund forms ('love to take pictures and capturing') is inconsistent; use parallel structure: 'love to take pictures and capture' or 'love taking pictures and capturing'. Remove duplicate 'in in' and redundant phrases. 'They in other countries' is ungrammatical; use 'there' to refer to places. Suggestion: use parallel verbs and eliminate repetition.

× Yes, I love to take pictures and capturing the moments in my country in in my country as well as in the other countries. Also because they in other countries, there are very different views with with different views and the.

✓ Yes, I love to take pictures and capture moments in my country as well as in other countries because there are very different views there.

The sentence uses 'they' incorrectly to refer to places; use 'there' to indicate location. Also avoid repeating nouns ('with different views and the'). Suggestion: replace 'they in other countries' with 'there in other countries' or simply 'there'.