Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevap doğal ve olumlu fakat konuşma akışı bozuk ve gereksiz tekrarlar var. Konuyu doğrudan belirten bir konu cümlesi kur, gereksiz kelime tekrarlarından kaçın ve örneklerle detaylandır. Bağlaçlarla (for example, when, because) cümleleri birbirine bağla ve cümle sayısını 3-4 cümlede tut.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views. I often take pictures while walking to school or when I go jogging because I love noticing small details in the environment. For example, I like capturing morning light on buildings or a quiet tree-lined street, which makes me feel excited and inspired.

Sugestão: Cevap kısa ve anlaşılır fakat dolgu sözcükleri (umm, like) ve tekrarlamalar azaltılmalı. Tercihi açıkça belirt ve gerekçe olarak spesifik nedenler ver (örneğin hava, huzur, manzara çeşitliliği). Bağlaçlarla neden-sonuç ilişkisi kur.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside feels calmer and cleaner. The fresh air, open fields and variety of natural colors help me relax, and I enjoy photographing landscapes like hills or rivers rather than crowded streets.

Sugestão: Cevap kararsız ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Önce net bir görüş belirt, sonra nedenleri somut örneklerle destekle. 'Depends on' kullanacaksanız hangi durumlarda değiştiğini açıklayın. Gereksiz kelimeleri çıkarın ve daha doğal ifadeler kullanın.

Exemplo: It depends on the type of view, but generally I prefer views in my own country because I'm familiar with them and can easily access many beautiful spots. For instance, our coastal areas and mountains are especially scenic, so I often photograph sunsets on the beach or hiking trails near my town.

× I like taking pictures of different views I saw while I'm walking around hanging, like just going to school, jogging.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views I see while I walk around, like when I'm going to school or jogging.

The original sentence mixes past and present forms and misuses the present participle 'walking' with incorrect continuous structure 'I'm walking' after a past reference 'I saw'. Use consistent present simple for habitual actions: 'I see' and 'I walk'. Also remove the unclear word 'hanging' and use 'when' to introduce the situations. Improve word order and punctuation to separate clauses.'

× It makes me feel excited and fascinated.

✓ It makes me feel excited and fascinated.

This sentence is correct; the present simple 'makes' appropriately describes a habitual reaction. No change needed.'

× Oh I really like both. Like umm, rural makes me feel better.

✓ Oh, I really like both, but rural areas make me feel better.

Original has informal fillers and a subject-verb agreement implied problem: 'rural' should be 'rural areas' and plural subject requires 'make'. Also add a conjunction 'but' for contrast and commas for clarity.'

× I guess I prefer rural because I like nature or the beauty of nature.

✓ I guess I prefer rural areas because I like nature and the beauty of the countryside.

Use 'rural areas' rather than 'rural'. 'Because' is fine; replace repetitive phrase 'the beauty of nature' with 'the beauty of the countryside' for natural collocation and clarity. Use 'and' instead of 'or' to show both reasons apply.'

× Depends on what are we talking about but I really like to use on my country so I prefer mine because my country has very beautiful views around the country.

✓ It depends on what we're talking about, but I really like my country, so I prefer it because it has very beautiful views all around.

The original has incorrect word order 'Depends on what are we talking about' (should be 'It depends on what we're talking about'). 'Like to use on my country' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I really like my country' and use the pronoun 'it' to refer to 'my country'. Avoid repetition 'around the country' by saying 'all around'. Ensure commas separate clauses and subject-verb agreement is correct.'