Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar (plural/singular and article use). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repetition like “appreciate that memory.”

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I take photos to help me remember architectural details I would otherwise forget, and I also enjoy revisiting those moments later. For example, when I photograph an old building I can study its design later and share it with friends.

Sugestão: Give one clear reason and use correct word forms and linking words. Replace vague phrases like “panoramic use” and “picking those pictures” with precise descriptions. Keep it to at most 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views, especially cityscapes at night, because illuminated buildings and wide panoramas create dramatic scenes. For instance, a riverside skyline photographed at dusk often looks vibrant and memorable.

Sugestão: This answer is unclear and off-topic (mentions singing). Start with a direct response (own country or other countries), then give a specific reason and an example. Avoid vague claims about being “special.”

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer unfamiliar architecture and cultural scenes that I haven’t seen at home. For example, photographing traditional markets in Morocco taught me about local crafts and gave me unique images I couldn’t capture locally.

× Yes, because taking a lot of pictures help me recall the buildings and details I otherwise might forget.

✓ Yes, because taking a lot of pictures helps me recall the buildings and details I would otherwise forget.

Subject-verb agreement with a gerund subject: 'taking a lot of pictures' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' not 'help'. Also 'I otherwise might forget' is awkward—'I would otherwise forget' is the natural conditional/modal structure. Suggestion: Use 'helps' with gerund subjects and 'would otherwise' for hypothetical past/future recall contexts.

× And capturing different views is really fun and gives me opportunity that I can appreciate that memory.

✓ And capturing different views is really fun and gives me the opportunity to appreciate those memories.

Article and noun number errors: 'gives me opportunity' requires the definite article 'the opportunity'. 'That I can appreciate that memory' is ungrammatical—use infinitive 'to appreciate' and plural 'those memories' to match 'different views'. Suggestion: Use 'the opportunity to' + base verb and ensure noun number matches context.

× I prefer views in urban areas, especially illuminated building at night and panoramic use of the city.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas, especially illuminated buildings at night and panoramic views of the city.

Wrong noun forms and word choice: 'illuminated building' should be plural 'illuminated buildings' to match the general preference. 'panoramic use of the city' is incorrect; 'panoramic views of the city' is the correct collocation. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general statements and standard collocations like 'panoramic views of'.

× Picking those pictures really makes my day memorable and impressive, which I want to remember forever.

✓ Taking those pictures really makes my day memorable and leaves a strong impression that I want to remember forever.

Awkward phrasing and incorrect modifier: 'Picking those pictures' is unclear—'taking those pictures' fits the context. 'Memorable and impressive' is acceptable but 'leaves a strong impression' is clearer; 'which I want to remember forever' modifies the impression, so rephrase to connect ideas clearly. Suggestion: Use clear verbs ('take') and link clauses so the relative pronoun refers to the correct noun.

× I prefer views in following countries because I really enjoy and admire singing and learning different cultures and different things in the world because it makes me special and knowledgeable.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering and learning about different cultures and things around the world, which makes me feel more knowledgeable.

Multiple issues: 'in following countries' is incorrect—use 'in other countries'. 'Enjoy and admire singing and learning different cultures' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely intended 'enjoy discovering and learning about different cultures'. Avoid repeating 'because'; combine ideas and clarify the result: 'which makes me feel more knowledgeable.' Suggestion: Use 'other countries', replace 'singing' (if unintended) with 'discovering' or remove, use 'learning about' for cultures, and avoid redundant 'because' clauses.