Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và câu trúc cơ bản: tránh lỗi động từ và danh từ (ví dụ: “play with my friends rivers or mountain” không đúng). Nên trả lời trực tiếp, ngắn gọn, và dùng liên từ phù hợp để nối ý. Hãy sửa lỗi chia động từ (it makes me...), dùng danh từ phù hợp (sunrise, landscapes) và trình bày tối đa 3–4 câu rõ ràng.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially rural landscapes. I often photograph rivers and mountains because they make me feel peaceful and relaxed. I also like capturing the sunrise, as the early light creates beautiful colors.

Sugestão: Cải thiện tính mạch lạc và tránh lặp ý: câu trả lời có ý chính tốt nhưng có một vài lỗi cấu trúc và cụm từ không tự nhiên (“with a reference river or mountain”). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, tiếp theo là lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn. Dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “for example” một cách chính xác.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they are calmer and more natural than city scenes. For example, a quiet river or a mountain trail helps me unwind and enjoy the scenery without noise or traffic.

Sugestão: Cải thiện rõ ràng nội dung, ngữ pháp và từ vựng cụ thể: nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp (số nhiều/số ít, thì, đại từ) và câu không mạch lạc. Tránh dùng cụm từ không đúng (“films”, “setful life”). Nên trả lời trực tiếp (“I prefer views in my own country.”), nêu lý do cụ thể (hometown memories, familiar scenery), và kết thúc bằng cảm xúc ngắn gọn.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because my hometown’s scenery feels familiar and meaningful to me. The rivers and nearby mountains remind me of childhood memories, and seeing them always calms me after a busy day.

× I really like to play with my friends rivers or mountain because it's make me feel peaceful and relax.

✓ I really like playing with my friends by rivers or mountains because it makes me feel peaceful and relaxed.

The verb 'like' when followed by another verb commonly takes the -ing form (gerund) to indicate enjoyment of an activity. 'Play with my friends rivers or mountain' lacks prepositions and plural forms: use 'by rivers or mountains' and plural 'mountains'. 'It's make' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; use 'it makes'. 'Relax' as an adjective should be 'relaxed' to describe the speaker's feeling. Suggestions: use 'like doing' + correct prepositions and plural nouns; ensure subject-verb agreement and use adjective form 'relaxed'.

× I also like taking estate the sunrise.

✓ I also like taking photos of the sunrise.

The phrase 'taking estate the sunrise' is incorrect. Likely intended 'taking (photos) of the sunrise'. Use the noun 'photos' and the preposition 'of'. 'Taking' is the present participle used correctly with 'like', but the object must be grammatical. Suggestions: say 'taking photos of the sunrise' or 'photographing the sunrise'.

× For example, I really like with a reference river or mountain because they make me feel relaxed and more comfortable.

✓ For example, I really like rivers or mountains because they make me feel relaxed and more comfortable.

The extraneous phrase 'with a reference' is ungrammatical here. After 'like' use nouns or gerunds directly: 'like rivers or mountains'. Keep plural nouns to match 'they'. Suggestions: remove unnecessary words and keep noun phrases simple.

× Yes, I prefer views in my countries because I love my countries.

✓ Yes, I prefer views in my country because I love my country.

The noun 'country' should be singular when referring to the speaker's own nation. Using 'countries' implies multiple nations which conflicts with context. Suggestions: use 'my country' to refer to a single homeland.

× I love everything about my hometown, rivers, mountain, films.

✓ I love everything about my hometown: rivers, mountains, and hills.

Parallel list items should be plural and consistent. 'rivers, mountain, films' mixes singular and plural and 'films' seems out of context. If intended landscapes, use 'rivers, mountains, and hills'. Suggestions: keep parallel structure and consistent pluralization; choose appropriate list items.

× That's whether I was born and raised.

✓ That's where I was born and raised.

The phrase 'That's whether I was born and raised' is ungrammatical. The correct relative adverb to indicate place is 'where'. Suggestions: use 'where' to refer to a place: 'That's where I was born and raised.'

× Is my eye is is the most beautiful landscape.

✓ In my opinion, it is the most beautiful landscape.

The original sentence has repeated 'is' and 'my eye' is an incorrect literal translation of an expression. Use 'In my opinion' or 'To my eyes' and then 'it is' to refer to the landscape. Suggestions: use 'In my opinion' or 'To my eyes, it is the most beautiful landscape.' and avoid literal translations.

× It's make me feel peaceful and comfortable after a setful life.

✓ It makes me feel peaceful and comfortable after a stressful life.

'It's make' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; use 'it makes'. 'setful' is not an English word; likely intended 'stressful'. Suggestions: ensure verb agrees with subject and choose correct vocabulary (stressful).