Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce repetition and produce a clear topic sentence. Use correct verb forms and clearer linking to explain reasons. Keep answers within 3–4 sentences and include a linking word when adding details.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me capture memories. For example, when I look at a photo from a trip, it reminds me of the place and the emotions I felt. This makes photos a useful way to revisit pleasant moments.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first, then support it with two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (plural/singular, articles) and avoid fragments.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because the skies are clearer and there is less traffic. In addition, rural places often have lots of green spaces, which feel peaceful. By contrast, urban views are busier and noisier, so I find rural scenery more relaxing.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then add specific examples and a brief reason. Use correct adjective forms and tenses, and avoid vague phrases like 'different from other country' without comparison.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because they are very varied and beautiful. For instance, we have beaches where sunrises and sunsets look spectacular, and also mountains with dramatic landscapes. Therefore, I feel more connected to these familiar scenes than to places I have never visited.

× So I watched the picture that I clicking on and it takes back to the memorable wonderful movie.

✓ So I looked at the pictures that I had clicked, and they took me back to wonderful memories.

Original uses incorrect verb forms: 'watched the picture' is unnatural for viewing photos (use 'looked at'), and 'that I clicking on' mixes tenses and lacks auxiliary; it should be past perfect ('had clicked') because the taking photos happened before looking at them. 'It takes back to the memorable wonderful movie' has subject-number and word order issues; change to 'they took me back to wonderful memories.' Use past tense consistently for completed actions. Suggestion: Use 'looked at' for viewing photos, use past perfect to show earlier action, and match plural subjects and verb forms.

× I like clicking the pictures over distinct view on different occasion as I save it as a fond memory whenever when I get bored.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views on different occasions because I save them as fond memories for when I get bored.

Problems: 'clicking the pictures' is informal; 'taking pictures' is preferable. 'Over distinct view' incorrectly uses 'over' and 'view' should be plural ('views') and 'on different occasion' needs plural 'occasions'. 'I save it' uses singular 'it' for plural 'pictures'—should be 'them'. 'whenever when' is redundant; use 'for when' or 'whenever.' Also use 'because' for reason. Suggestion: Correct prepositions ('of'), pluralize nouns and pronouns to agree, and remove redundancy.

× Well, I prefer rural areas views as the skies were clear and there were no traffic all all area were full of green spaces and it looks like a beautiful and the amazing on the contrast the urban areas are full of traffic and the.

✓ Well, I prefer views in rural areas because the skies are clear, there is no traffic, and the whole area is full of green spaces; it looks beautiful and amazing. In contrast, urban areas are full of traffic.

Multiple errors: 'rural areas views' has wrong word order; use 'views in rural areas.' Tense and agreement: mix of past ('were') and present — keep present when stating general preferences ('are clear'). 'There were no traffic' is wrong: 'traffic' is uncountable, so use 'there is no traffic.' 'All all area were' should be 'the whole area is' (singular). 'It looks like a beautiful and the amazing' has article and adjective issues; use 'it looks beautiful and amazing.' Ended sentence incomplete; complete contrast clause: 'In contrast, urban areas are full of traffic.' Suggestion: Keep consistent tense, correct subject-verb agreement, fix word order and articles.

× Well I like the view of my country because it is a mesmerizing as there are various places where we can see the different types of view like a sunrise or a sunset on a beach which made it different from other country.

✓ Well, I like the views in my country because they are mesmerizing; there are many places where we can see different kinds of views, like a sunrise or sunset on a beach, which makes it different from other countries.

Pronoun and agreement errors: 'the view of my country' should be plural 'views' if referring to many scenes. 'It is a mesmerizing' uses 'a' with an adjective; remove 'a' or use a noun ('a mesmerizing place'). 'We can see the different types of view' is awkward—use 'different kinds of views.' 'Which made it different from other country' mixes tense and number: use present 'which makes it different from other countries.' Suggestion: Use plural nouns/pronouns to match meaning, remove incorrect articles before adjectives, keep tense consistent, and pluralize 'country' when comparing to multiple countries.