Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be careful with grammar, word choice and pronunciation. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid invented words like “photaholic,” correct articles and pronouns, and limit to 3–4 concise sentences. Use linking words (for example, "because" or "so") and give a specific example of a view you like to make the answer concrete.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember special moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets at the beach as the colours change quickly and create dramatic scenes. I also take close-up shots of flowers to capture small details, so I can look back at them later.

Sugestão: Use correct tense and smoother phrasing. Begin with a direct statement (I prefer...), then give 1–2 specific supporting reasons with linking words like "because" or "for example." Avoid repetition and incomplete endings. Provide concrete visual details to strengthen your answer.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because I grew up in the countryside and find them more peaceful. For example, I like photographing green fields, old stone houses and farmers working at dusk because they create natural, timeless scenes. These details make my photos feel more authentic and calming.

Sugestão: Make a clear direct response first (either prefer own country or both). Fix grammar (e.g., "India is a country with diverse states"), avoid incorrect verbs like "explode" and use precise expressions like "explore" and "broaden my horizons." Provide one clear example from India and one reason why you would like to see other countries, using linking words such as "however" or "also."

Exemplo: I enjoy views in my own country because India has very diverse landscapes, such as the mountains of Ladakh and the valleys of Kashmir, which offer unique photo opportunities. However, I would also like to explore other countries to learn about different cultures and landscapes, for instance photographing the coastal cliffs in Portugal to compare light and colours.

× Honestly speaking, I am photogenic and photaholic.

✓ Honestly speaking, I am photogenic and a photoaholic.

The word 'photaholic' is nonstandard. Use 'photoaholic' (a person addicted to taking photos) and include the article 'a' before compound noun phrases. Also 'photogenic' is correct as an adjective describing appearance. Suggestion: use standard vocabulary and include appropriate articles.

× I love taking images of different views.

✓ I love taking images of different views.

No change needed; sentence is grammatically correct. Included to show it's correct.

× I personally believe a pictures are often taken as they help to cherish the memories.

✓ I personally believe pictures are often taken because they help to cherish memories.

The article 'a' cannot be used with plural noun 'pictures'. Remove 'a' and use 'because' for clarity. Also 'the memories' is unnecessary; use uncountable 'memories' for general sense.

× Moreover, 1 feels an emotional connect with various type of images as they tend to reflect the older experiences or person.

✓ Moreover, I feel an emotional connection with various types of images, as they tend to reflect past experiences or people.

Mistakes: '1' is likely a typo for 'I'; use 'connection' instead of informal 'connect'; 'various type' should be plural 'various types'; 'the older experiences' should be 'past experiences'; 'person' should be plural 'people' to match 'images'. Also add commas for clarity.

× I had grown up in a countryside area, so the village view would probably be more beautiful.

✓ I grew up in the countryside, so village views are probably more beautiful.

Use simple past 'grew up' rather than past perfect 'had grown up' because no earlier past reference is given. 'In a countryside area' is awkward: use 'in the countryside'. 'Village view would probably be more beautiful' shifts modality; present general preference better with 'are probably more beautiful'.

× I believe there are a lot of traditional things one can view in a village area.

✓ I believe there are many traditional things one can see in a village.

Use 'many' with countable 'things' instead of 'a lot of' for more formal style. 'View' as a verb is incorrect here; use 'see'. 'Village area' is redundant; use 'village'.

× Moreover, the serene and mesmerizing view of green fields and and lands can make the pictures more.

✓ Moreover, the serene and mesmerizing views of green fields and farmland can make the pictures more appealing.

Errors: duplicate 'and and'; 'view' should be plural 'views' to match multiple elements; 'lands' is awkward—use 'farmland' or 'fields'; sentence ends incomplete 'more'—add 'appealing' or similar adjective to complete meaning.

× When India is a culture, India is a country with diverse States and which represents beautiful views.

✓ India is a country with a rich culture and diverse states that offer beautiful views.

Original has awkward clause 'When India is a culture' and unnecessary repetition. Use 'a country with a rich culture' and make a relative clause 'that offer beautiful views'. Capitalization: 'States' lowercase unless proper noun. 'Represent' is not appropriate; 'offer' or 'have' is better.

× For example, Jammu and Kashmir, Leh, Ladakh was amongst the best tourist places.

✓ For example, Jammu and Kashmir, Leh, and Ladakh were among the best tourist places.

Compound subject requires plural verb 'were' not 'was'. Use 'and' before last item and 'among' is more idiomatic than 'amongst'. Also include commas appropriately.

× But if I would be given a chance, I would definitely love to explode the other countries as I'll be able to enhance my knowledge and it will broaden my horizon about different.

✓ But if I were given the chance, I would definitely love to explore other countries, as I would be able to broaden my knowledge and my horizons about different cultures.

Use the subjunctive 'If I were given the chance' for hypothetical condition, not 'if I would'. 'Explode' is wrong word; use 'explore'. Avoid mixing future 'I'll' with conditional; use 'I would' consistently. 'Broaden my horizon' should be plural 'horizons' and specify 'different cultures' to complete the idea.