Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with simple linking words. Avoid repetition and tense errors. For example, say why you enjoy photos (memory, beauty) and give a brief example of when you take photos.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me preserve memories. For example, I often photograph sunsets when I travel so I can remember the colours and atmosphere later.

Sugestão: Answer directly (urban or rural) with a clear topic sentence, then give specific supporting details using linking words (because, for example, however). Correct vocabulary (e.g., "views," "rural areas") and reduce repetition. Keep to one or two supporting sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because I grew up there and I love the green landscapes. For example, I enjoy walking in the fields at sunrise and sunset when the light makes the scenery especially beautiful; in contrast, urban areas feel crowded and noisy.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer then add one or two specific reasons and a short example. Use correct grammar (present perfect or present simple), simplify awkward phrases (e.g., "show to foreign friends"). Avoid redundant words like "more" repeated.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I know the places well and want to explore them further. For instance, I often photograph local landmarks and share the best shots with my foreign friends so they can see what my country looks like.

× I really love to click pictures because I thought that our past never be came again so by clicking the memories we will watch it that at anytime and also it will.

✓ I really love taking pictures because I think the past never comes back, so by capturing memories we can look at them anytime.

The student used past tense 'thought' and incorrect phrase 'never be came again' which mixes tenses and incorrect verb forms. Use present tense 'think' to express a general belief. 'Be came' is incorrect; use 'comes back'. Also change 'click pictures' to 'take/capture pictures' for natural English and remove redundant clauses. Suggestion: maintain present simple for general truths and use correct verb forms (come back).

× I prefer news in rural areas because I live in rural area which is my favorite place and also my hometown is in rural area because in rural area there are very much greenery plants and which seems very beautiful at the time of evening and also in the time of morning.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I live in a rural area, which is my favorite place; my hometown is rural and there is a lot of greenery that looks very beautiful in the morning and evening.

Multiple adjective/adverb and article issues: 'news' is incorrect word choice; should be 'views'. 'Rural area' needs an article 'a rural area'. 'Very much greenery plants' is ungrammatical — use 'a lot of greenery' or 'many plants'. 'Which seems' was a misplaced relative clause. Use clear sentence structure and correct adjective usage. Suggestion: use 'a lot of' for uncountable nouns (greenery) and place time expressions ('in the morning and evening') correctly.

× But in the urban areas there are so many crowds so that we.

✓ But in urban areas there are large crowds, so I prefer rural places.

The original sentence is incomplete ('so that we.'). Also 'so many crowds' is awkward; use 'large crowds' or 'many people'. Fix sentence by completing the idea and using proper noun phrase order. Suggestion: ensure each sentence has a clear subject and verb and completes the intended meaning.

× Well I love views in my own country because I'm living in my country since my birth so I love my country more and also want to explore more my country and to click many pictures to show any form on my any foreigner friend too so that they will see.

✓ Well, I love the views in my own country because I have lived here since my birth, so I love my country and want to explore it more and take many pictures to show to my foreign friends so they can see them.

The phrase 'I'm living in my country since my birth' mixes present continuous with 'since' which requires present perfect ('have lived'). 'Click' is informal; use 'take'. 'Any foreigner friend' is incorrect; use 'my foreign friends'. Also fix word order and redundant words. Suggestion: use present perfect with 'since' for actions from the past continuing to present, and simplify phrases for clarity.