Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, correct grammar and clarify your idea. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like taking photos, then give one brief reason and one specific example. Avoid contradictory phrases (e.g. "not much of a photo taking person" then saying you take pictures). Use linking words like "but" or "so" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I don't often take photos; I prefer to soak up the view and relax. However, when I see something special I sometimes take a quick photo to remember it, for example a sunset over the river during a weekend walk.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, fix grammar (subject-verb agreement and phrasing), and tighten repetition. Provide one specific detail or example about what fascinates you and use a linking word to introduce it.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I find architecture fascinating. For instance, I love watching old cathedrals and modern skyscrapers side by side, which makes me curious about the history and engineering behind them.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer (both/one) and give balanced reasons using linking words like "because" and "however." Be specific about what you like at home and what you'd like to see abroad to make the response more informative.

Exemplo: I enjoy views in my own country because I'm familiar with the landmarks and feel a strong connection to them. However, I also want to visit other countries to see different landscapes, such as alpine mountains in Switzerland or coastal cliffs in Portugal.

× I'm not much of a photo taking person.

✓ I'm not much of a photo-taking person.

Use a hyphen to form the compound adjective 'photo-taking' that modifies 'person'. Without the hyphen it looks awkward; grammatically the noun 'photo' and the verb-derived noun 'taking' combine to modify 'person'. Suggestion: use 'photo-taking' or 'someone who takes photos'.

× Instead I like to embrace and soak up the view and relax in the state of taking out my phone and take pictures.

✓ Instead I like to embrace and soak up the view and relax instead of taking out my phone and taking pictures.

The original mixes infinitive 'to take' with gerund 'taking' and has awkward structure 'in the state of'. Correct form uses parallel gerunds: 'taking out my phone and taking pictures' or rephrase to 'instead of taking out my phone to take pictures'. Suggestion: keep parallel -ing forms and avoid phrases like 'in the state of'.

× To be honest, I prefer urban views because different architectural and urban designs fascinates me and it makes me curious about how long a building like this really takes to stand here.

✓ To be honest, I prefer urban views because different architectural and urban designs fascinate me and make me curious about how long it took for a building like this to be built here.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'designs' (plural) requires 'fascinate' not 'fascinates' (Grammar Problem Type 27 also applies, but corrected under adjective/adverb). Also 'it makes me curious' can be shortened to 'make me curious' to match plural subject. Additionally, 'how long a building like this really takes to stand here' is ungrammatical: use passive 'how long it took for a building like this to be built' or 'how long it takes for a building like this to be built' depending on tense. Suggestion: use 'fascinate' and correct passive construction for building timeframe.

× So that by itself excites me.

✓ That, by itself, excites me.

Word order and punctuation: 'So that by itself excites me' is awkward. Removing 'So' or placing commas improves clarity. Use present tense 'excites' is fine; just rephrase: 'That, by itself, excites me.' Suggestion: avoid starting sentence with 'So that' here; use 'That' or 'That by itself'.

× Well, I like the views in my country since I'm familiar with it, but I would also like to visit other countries and enjoy the scenery and also the nature across different countries.

✓ Well, I like the views in my country since I'm familiar with them, but I would also like to visit other countries and enjoy the scenery and nature there.

Pronoun 'it' is incorrect for 'views' (plural); use 'them' (plural). Repetition 'across different countries' and 'also' are redundant; 'there' simplifies reference. Suggestion: match pronoun number to its antecedent and avoid repetition by using 'there' or 'in other countries'.