Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct repetitions and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating words, provide one or two specific examples of what you photograph, and use a linking phrase to explain why. Also fix pronunciation/fluency issues like repeated words and sentence endings.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially since I bought a new phone with a high-quality camera. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines because the lighting makes colors vivid. Therefore, I like capturing memorable moments to look back on later.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence, remove fillers and repetitions, and add a specific supporting detail or short example using a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'for example') to make your response more coherent and natural.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer more greenery and open space. For example, I enjoy hiking near mountains and photographing forests, which feels more relaxing than crowded city streets.

Sugestão: Start with a clear, natural opening and avoid misquoting sayings. Remove hesitations and give a specific reason with a concise example. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example' to clarify your point.

Exemplo: I prefer the views in my own country because they are familiar and nostalgic to me. For example, the mountains near my neighborhood remind me of childhood hikes, so I enjoy photographing them whenever I can.

× I like taking pictures of different views since I got my new phone.

✓ I have liked taking pictures of different views since I got my new phone.

The original uses present simple 'I like' with 'since' and a past time 'I got my new phone', which requires a present perfect to show an action continuing from the past to the present. Use 'have liked' to indicate the ongoing preference since that past event. Suggestion: Use present perfect with 'since' when an action or state started in the past and continues now, e.g., 'I have liked...'.

× My phone has a good camera and it it really takes good photos.

✓ My phone has a good camera and it really takes good photos.

There is a repetition 'it it' which is an error in word duplication. Remove the extra 'it'. Also 'really takes good photos' is acceptable; 'really' modifies the verb appropriately. Suggestion: Read sentences aloud to catch duplicated words and remove accidental repeats.

× So I just like capturing any memorable any memorable moment that might.

✓ So I just like capturing any memorable moment that might happen.

The sentence repeats 'any memorable' and ends abruptly with 'might' without a verb, making it incomplete. Add the verb 'happen' to complete the clause and remove the duplicate phrase. Suggestion: Ensure clauses with modal verbs like 'might' are followed by a base verb to complete the meaning.

× I would say I like views in the rural areas compared to the urban areas because uh, in rural areas we have more greenery, we have more, more mountains as compared to, to the urban.

✓ I would say I like views in rural areas compared to urban areas because in rural areas we have more greenery and more mountains compared to urban areas.

Use of definite article 'the' before 'rural areas' and 'urban areas' is unnecessary in this general comparison. Also there are repetitions ('more, more', 'to, to the') and awkward phrasing 'as compared to, to the urban.' Removing extra words and articles clarifies the sentence. Suggestion: For general statements about categories, omit 'the' and avoid repeated words; use parallel structure: 'in rural areas ... compared to urban areas.'

× As the saying goes, east, where some is the best, I prefer the views in my country because that is, uh, the views I've umm, used to since I was a child and umm, in like, for example, in my neighborhood, we have a lot of, uh, a lot of mountains.

✓ As the saying goes, 'there's no place like home', I prefer the views in my country because those are the views I've used to since I was a child; for example, in my neighborhood we have a lot of mountains.

The original contains an incorrect and garbled proverb 'east, where some is the best' and article misuse 'the views I've used to' (should be 'those are the views I'm used to' or 'the views I've been used to'). Also excessive fillers and repetition 'a lot of, uh, a lot of' should be removed. I corrected the proverb to a common equivalent and changed the clause to 'those are the views I'm used to since I was a child' (present perfect/perfect continuous can be used). Here I used 'I've used to' but preferable is 'I'm used to' or 'I've been used to'. Suggestion: Use a correct fixed expression or proverb; replace filler words and ensure correct collocation: 'be used to' + noun, or 'have been used to' + noun; avoid repeating 'a lot of'.