Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, vocabulary and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, use correct plural/singular and verb forms, and replace unclear words. Add one supporting reason with a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph mountains and cityscapes because taking photos helps me relax and preserves memorable moments. I also like trying different angles to capture the atmosphere.

Sugestão: Make the answer a complete, fluent response with correct grammar and linking words. State your preference clearly, give specific reasons, and avoid vague phrases. Use plural/singular agreement and correct tense and articles.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy natural scenery with lots of greenery. For instance, seeing fields and trees calms me and helps me unwind after a busy day, so I often choose the countryside when I go out to take photos.

Sugestão: Clarify the comparison and correct grammar. Begin with a clear topic sentence saying you like both, then explain why with a specific example and a linking word. Fix subject-verb agreement and unclear place name.

Exemplo: I like views both in my own country and abroad because each place offers unique scenery. For example, local landscapes feel familiar and comforting, whereas foreign places often have different architecture and colors that inspire me to take new kinds of photos.

× I like taking pictures of different view such as mountain, dubious or the city because it's helped me relax and memorable.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views such as mountains, rivers, or the city because they help me relax and are memorable.

The sentence has pluralization errors: 'view' should be 'views' and countable nouns like 'mountain' need plural 'mountains'. 'dubious' is incorrect noun — likely intended 'river' or 'valley'; I replaced it with 'rivers' as a plausible view. Pronoun and verb agreement: 'it's helped me' is wrong because plural 'views' take plural reference 'they' and present simple 'help' fits the general statement. Also 'memorable' needs a verb 'are memorable' to connect to subject. Suggestion: identify correct nouns, pluralize when referring to multiple items, and ensure verbs agree with subjects.

× I prefer view in rural area because I like natural with green.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I like nature and greenery.

Several singular/plural mismatches: 'view' should be 'views' when speaking generally, and 'rural area' should be 'rural areas' for a general preference. 'natural' is an adjective but the noun 'nature' is needed; 'green' as a noun is awkward, so 'greenery' better expresses plants and green spaces. Suggestion: use plural forms for general preferences and choose correct noun forms ('nature', 'greenery').

× Blue color is help me feel calm, feel more relaxed after a long day.

✓ The color blue helps me feel calm and more relaxed after a long day.

Word choice and verb form errors: 'Blue color' is unnatural in English; 'the color blue' is correct. 'is help me' mixes present continuous with base verb; the correct present simple agreement is 'helps me'. Also combine parallel verbs smoothly: 'helps me feel calm and more relaxed'. Suggestion: use 'the color blue' and present simple 'helps' for habitual feelings, and keep parallel structure.

× I like both in my country and Anatou Kanti because everywhere have a special or unique view so it's help me.

✓ I like views both in my country and in Anatou Kanti because everywhere has a special or unique view, so it helps me.

Multiple agreement errors: 'I like both in my country and Anatou Kanti' lacks the noun 'views' and the preposition 'in' before the second place; adding 'views' clarifies meaning. 'everywhere have' should be 'everywhere has' because 'everywhere' is singular. 'it's help me' should be 'it helps me' to agree with singular 'it' and use present simple. Suggestion: include the noun being liked ('views'), use 'in' consistently for locations, and ensure subject-verb agreement with 'everywhere' and 'it'.