Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật tự từ; nói rõ ràng, súc tích trong tối đa 4-5 câu; dùng từ phù hợp và tránh lặp ý. Cụ thể: dùng thì đúng (e.g., ‘preserve’ thay vì ‘preserves’ nếu chủ ngữ là ‘photos’), sửa cấu trúc bất thường (‘I quite follow the taking picture…’ → ‘I often take pictures of beautiful scenery’), và thêm liên từ hợp lý để mạch lạc (e.g., ‘because’, ‘so’, ‘which’). Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể về loại cảnh bạn thích để làm câu trả lời chi tiết hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take pictures of beautiful scenery whenever I travel. I think photos are a great way to capture special moments and preserve memories, so I can look back on them later. I especially enjoy photographing natural landscapes, such as lakes at sunrise, because the light and reflections are very striking.

Sugestão: Cải thiện từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu; nói ngắn gọn rõ ràng với một câu chủ đề và 1–2 câu bổ sung. Sửa lỗi lựa chọn từ (e.g., ‘prefer rural areas’ chứ không phải ‘refer rural bills’), danh từ số nhiều/số ít, và cụm từ không tự nhiên (‘surrounded by nature’ thay vì ‘surrounded by natural’). Dùng liên từ để nối ý (e.g., ‘because’, ‘so’) và nêu lý do cụ thể vì sao bạn thích vùng quê.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because they are incredibly peaceful and surrounded by nature. For example, I love visiting Greenfield to see the mountains and lakes, which help me relax after the busy city life.

Sugestão: Làm rõ ý chính và sử dụng cách diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn; sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự từ. Tránh cụm từ không chính thức như ‘I am way curious’; thay bằng ‘I’m very curious’. Kết hợp câu bằng liên từ để mạch lạc (e.g., ‘because’, ‘so’) và thêm một ví dụ cụ thể (một quốc gia hoặc loại cảnh) để tăng tính cụ thể.

Exemplo: I’m more curious about landscapes in other countries because they offer new experiences that are very different from what I know. For instance, seeing the terraced rice fields in Southeast Asia or the fjords in Norway made my trips much more memorable.

× Yes I do, I quite follow the taking picture beautiful scenery whenever I travel or visit some venue.

✓ Yes, I do. I quite often take pictures of beautiful scenery whenever I travel or visit a place.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing/misused words. Use 'quite often' for frequency (adverb), 'take pictures of' is the correct verb phrase, and 'a place' or 'a venue' fits instead of 'some venue'. Improve by placing adverbs before the main verb and using the correct verb phrase.

× I think photos are a great way to capture special moments and preserves memories thus I can look back on the future.

✓ I think photos are a great way to capture special moments and preserve memories so I can look back on them in the future.

Parallel verb forms require 'preserve' (base form) after 'and' to match 'capture'. Also use 'so' for result and 'in the future' is the correct phrase; refer back to 'them' (photos) with a pronoun. Improve by keeping verbs parallel and using correct prepositional phrases.

× I simply enjoy photographing natural landscapes such as modern lake.

✓ I simply enjoy photographing natural landscapes such as mountain lakes.

'Modern lake' is incorrect collocation; likely intended 'mountain lake' or 'mountain lakes' as plural to match 'landscapes'. Use plural for general preference. Improve by choosing the correct noun phrase and matching number.

× I would say I refer rural bills.

✓ I would say I prefer rural areas.

'Refer' is incorrect; should be 'prefer'. 'Rural bills' is meaningless; use 'rural areas'. Improve by choosing the correct verb and noun to express preference.

× There's something incredibly peaceful because it's surrounded by natural.

✓ There's something incredibly peaceful because it's surrounded by nature.

Use the noun 'nature' instead of adjective 'natural'. 'Surrounded by nature' is the correct prepositional phrase. Improve by using the correct noun form.

× I love seeing Greenfield mountain and lake because they have miss escaped posture and also in city life wherever I did this countryside feel much more relaxed and.

✓ I love seeing the green mountains and lakes because they have a peaceful atmosphere, and life in the countryside feels much more relaxed than in the city.

The original sentence has many incorrect words and fragmented structure: 'miss escaped posture' is meaningless; replace with 'peaceful atmosphere'. Use comparative phrase 'more relaxed than in the city'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and complete clauses. Improve by simplifying and using clear vocabulary for contrast.

× I am way curious about landscapes in other countries because they offer experience, thus are completely different from what I am used to.

✓ I am very curious about landscapes in other countries because they offer different experiences and are completely different from what I am used to.

Use 'very' instead of informal 'way'. 'Offer experience' should be 'offer different experiences' (plural and adjective). Keep parallel structure with 'offer ... and are ...'. Improve by using appropriate adverbs and plural nouns.

× Exploring unfamiliar scenery made traveling much more memorable.

✓ Exploring unfamiliar scenery makes travel much more memorable.

Use present tense 'makes' to match the general statement about a habit/preference. Use 'travel' (uncountable/general) instead of 'traveling' to sound natural here. Improve by using present simple for general truths.

× That's this.

✓ That's it.

'That's this' is incorrect; the correct phrase to finish a remark is 'That's it.' Improve by using the standard closing expression.