Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, correct grammar and avoid fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Replace vague phrases with precise expressions and remove hesitation. For example, say why panoramic views appeal to you (composition, light) and explain the purpose of posting (share experiences with family/followers).

Exemplo: I enjoy photographing panoramic views, especially when I travel, because they capture the scale and atmosphere of a place. For example, a wide mountain panorama shows the changing light and makes it easy to share the experience with my family and social media followers.

Sugestão: Correct grammar, clarify unclear vocabulary (what is 'white'?), reduce repetition, and use linking words to connect ideas. Begin with a direct statement of preference, then give specific reasons (energy, architecture, lighting), and finish with a brief personal feeling. Avoid repeating words and fix verb forms.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because city scenes are more lively and offer interesting architecture and lighting. For instance, night-time streetlights and reflections on glass create dramatic photos and make me feel connected to the city where I live.

Sugestão: Make sentences more grammatical and coherent. State your preference clearly, then give two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., because, however). Avoid contradictions without explanation. Provide concrete examples of what interests you abroad (architecture, landscapes, cultural scenes).

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering different landscapes and cultural scenes. However, I still appreciate views at home—for example, our coastal sunsets are beautiful—but travelling lets me experience new perspectives such as historical architecture and local festivals.

× I really like taking pictures of panoramic view, especially when I go travelling because it's a way for me to keep it in my memory.

✓ I really like taking pictures of panoramic views, especially when I go travelling because it's a way for me to keep them in my memory.

Error type 22 (Article errors) and 1 (Singular and plural issue): 'panoramic view' should be plural 'panoramic views' because the speaker refers to taking many pictures in general. Also 'it' is incorrect when referring back to 'pictures' (plural); use 'them'. Suggestion: match nouns and pronouns in number and use plural for general habitual actions.

× And I really love to post it online because it will, uh, create an engagement towards my social media and also want to share it with others too.

✓ And I really love to post them online because they will, uh, create engagement on my social media, and I also want to share them with others.

Error type 10 (Verb in the present participle form) and 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions): 'post it' should be 'post them' to match plural 'pictures'. 'Create an engagement towards' is unnatural: use 'create engagement on' or 'generate engagement on'. Also 'and also want to share it' lacks a subject; add 'I' and use 'them'. Suggestion: keep pronouns consistent with antecedents and use natural prepositions for 'engagement on'.

× My family, my friends, yeah.

✓ My family and my friends, yeah.

Error type 1 (Singular and plural issue)/26 (Sentence structure errors): The original fragment uses commas and is a fragment; better connect items with 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'and' to list people and make the fragment clearer.

× I'm actually a city girl, so I prefer this in urban areas because it's more lively and I really love the white that you get from the photo itself and it's keeps me feels like I belong to the city and help help me to actually feels like I live there.

✓ I'm actually a city girl, so I prefer urban areas because they're livelier. I really love the light you get in the photos, and they make me feel like I belong to the city and help me feel like I live there.

Error type 2 (Third person singular issue), 6 (Present tense issue), 1 (Singular and plural issue) and 20 (Incorrect adverb placement): 'it's keeps me feels' is incorrect: 'it keeps me feeling' or better 'they make me feel'. 'the white' likely intended 'the light'; 'it's more lively' should be 'they're livelier' referring to 'urban areas'. Remove duplicate 'help'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, correct word choice ('light' not 'white'), and maintain consistent pronouns (they for plural). Use proper verb forms for feelings: 'make me feel'.

× I think I prefer views from other countries because I like to go around and find new places to explore.

✓ I think I prefer views from other countries because I like to go around and find new places to explore.

No correction needed for grammar types listed; sentence is acceptable. No changes required.

× But our view is also not comparable to others country.

✓ But our views are also not comparable to other countries'.

Error type 22 (Article errors) and 1 (Singular and plural issue): 'our view' should be plural 'our views' (general), and 'others country' is incorrect; use 'other countries' or 'other country's' depending on meaning. If comparing our views to those of other countries, use 'other countries' and keep plural. Suggestion: match plurals and use correct form 'other countries'.

× But I just prefer to see different perspective of life and different cultures.

✓ But I just prefer to see different perspectives on life and different cultures.

Error type 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns) and 1 (Singular and plural issue) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions): 'perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' when speaking generally, and use 'on life' rather than 'of life'. Suggestion: use plural for general ideas and correct preposition 'on'.