Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct repetitions and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail using a linking phrase. Avoid repeating words and fix verb forms (e.g., "I would take them").

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I especially like capturing sunsets and rainbows because the changing colors make each photo unique.

Sugestão: Correct vocabulary and pronunciation errors ("your" -> "rural") and use clearer linking words. Give a concise topic sentence, then support it with two specific reasons linked logically (e.g., "because" and "also").

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because there are no tall buildings and the skies are clearer, so the air feels fresher. Also, the natural landscapes like fields and hills look more picturesque than cityscapes.

Sugestão: Avoid repetitions and improve sentence structure. Use a direct topic sentence, then give a concise reason and one specific example or detail. Fix grammar (e.g., remove extra "to" and correct "my countries" to "my country").

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I want to experience different landscapes and cultures. For instance, I would love to see the rugged coastlines of Scotland or the colorful markets of Morocco to get a fresh perspective.

× Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when there's different sky, like when there's a sunset or a rainbow.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when there is a different sky, like during a sunset or a rainbow.

The phrase 'there's different sky' misuses the contraction 'there's' (there is) with a noncount or singular noun in a context that needs an article or different phrasing. Use 'there is a different sky' or better 'there is a different sky' but 'during a sunset or a rainbow' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'there is a' for singular countable nouns and 'during' to indicate time when the sky looks different.

× I would I would take it.

✓ I would take it.

This sentence repeats 'I would' and uses an object 'it' that is vague. Remove the duplicate modal 'I would' for grammatical accuracy. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use 'I would take it' or 'I would take that picture' for clarity.

× I prefer views more in your areas cause in your areas there's no big buildings and the sky is not polluted and fresh air and there's the landscape.

✓ I prefer views more in rural areas because in rural areas there are no big buildings, the sky is not polluted, the air is fresh, and there is more landscape.

The student used 'your areas' instead of 'rural areas' (probably mispronunciation/wrong word) and omitted articles and plural agreement. 'There are no big buildings' requires plural verb agreement. List items need parallel structure and conjunctions. Suggestion: use 'because' not 'cause' in formal speech, ensure subject-verb agreement ('there are no big buildings'), include articles and maintain parallel structure.

× It's more beautiful than in cities.

✓ It is more beautiful than in cities.

Contraction 'It's' is acceptable; main issue is clarity: compare 'rural areas' (plural) to 'cities' (plural) is fine. No major grammar error here aside from possibly preferring 'They are more beautiful than cities' but the corrected form keeps meaning. Suggestion: ensure clear comparison subject if needed: 'Rural areas are more beautiful than cities.'

× Of course I would prefer views in other countries.

✓ Of course I would prefer views in other countries.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses modal 'would' appropriately to express preference. No change needed. Suggestion: none.

× I'm hoping to go to more countries to to look at to look at their views and landscape.

✓ I'm hoping to go to more countries to look at their views and landscapes.

There is repetition 'to to look at to look at' and 'landscape' should be plural when referring to various countries. Remove the duplicate phrase and use plural 'landscapes.' Suggestion: avoid repeating infinitives and match plural nouns when referring to multiple places.

× Even though my countries have beautiful views but I get bored by looking at it every day.

✓ Even though my country has beautiful views, I get bored of looking at them every day.

Problems: 'my countries' is incorrect if speaker means their own country; if they mean multiple countries, context suggests singular 'my country.' Use 'has' for singular subject. Also 'but' is redundant after 'even though.' Pronouns must agree: 'views' (plural) pairs with 'them' not 'it.' 'Bored of' or 'bored by' both possible; 'bored of' is idiomatic in many varieties. Suggestion: choose correct subject number, remove redundant conjunction, and ensure pronoun agreement with plural noun.