Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. In Part 1 you should answer directly with a topic sentence and then add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural and no more than 5 sentences. For example, state whether you like taking pictures, give a reason and a short example.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me notice details I might otherwise miss. For instance, when I walk in my neighborhood I often stop to photograph interesting buildings or trees, and later I review the photos to remember the scene.

Sugestão: Again, you repeated the examiner. You should state a clear preference, then explain why using linking words (for example, because/so). Provide a specific example to make the answer more informative and natural.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because I find the open spaces and natural scenery more relaxing. For example, I like photographing fields and mountains during sunset, which gives me calmer and more colorful images than busy city streets.

Sugestão: You repeated the question instead of answering. Provide a direct answer (preference), then give reasons and a brief example. Use linking words such as however or but if you want to contrast options.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultural landscapes and architecture that I rarely see at home. For instance, when I visited a neighboring country last year I photographed unique temples and coastal towns that inspired new ideas for my photography.

× Do you like taking pictures of different view?

✓ Do you like taking pictures of different views?

The noun 'view' should be plural 'views' because 'different' implies more than one item. Use plural form with countable nouns after words like 'different' or when talking about multiple examples. Suggestion: use 'views' whenever referring to several scenes or kinds of view.

× Do you prefer view urban areas or rural areas?

✓ Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

'View' should be plural 'views' and the preposition 'in' is needed to indicate location. The original lacks plural and the noun phrase is missing a preposition. Suggestion: use 'views in urban areas' or 'views of urban areas' to express preference about types of scenery.

× Do you prefer view in your own country or others countries?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Two errors: 'view' should be plural 'views' because it refers to multiple scenes, and 'others countries' is incorrect; use 'other countries' without the plural possessive 'others'. Also include 'in' before 'other countries' for parallel structure. Suggestion: keep parallel prepositions and use 'other countries.'