Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 문법과 표현을 자연스럽게 고치고 불필요한 반복을 줄이세요. 주어와 동사의 형태(예: "to taking" → "to take")를 바로잡고, 중복된 표현("take picture to take picture", "nature, nature view")을 제거하세요. 또한 한두 문장으로 핵심을 말한 뒤 하나의 구체적 세부사항(어떤 장면을 좋아하는지 또는 어떤 카메라 설정을 쓰는지)을 덧붙여 보세요. 연결어(예: "also", "for example")를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 이어주세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I usually use my film camera because I like the texture and color it produces. For example, I often photograph landscapes and close-ups of plants to capture natural details.

Sugestão: 문장이 자연스럽고 완성되도록 문법 오류와 어색한 표현을 수정하세요(예: "the view of the nature" → "views of nature", "make me"은 의미 불명). 이유를 말할 때에는 연결어로 구조를 명확히 하고, 감정의 결과를 완전한 문장으로 표현하세요. 가능한 한 구체적인 디테일(어떤 점이 평화로운지, 특정 장소나 활동)을 추가하면 더 설득력 있습니다.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because I enjoy seeing open fields and mountains rather than tall buildings. This kind of scenery makes me feel calm and relaxed, especially when I go for a quiet walk in the countryside.

Sugestão: 문법 일치와 시제 사용을 정확히 하고 문장을 더 명확하게 만드세요(예: "views of my country is" → "views of my country are"). 이유를 말할 때에는 연결어(예: "because", "for example")를 사용해 근거와 예시를 깔끔하게 제시하고, 한두 개의 구체적 비교 포인트를 추가하세요(예: 풍경의 다양성, 새로운 경험 등).

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because familiar scenery at home can feel repetitive. For example, when I visited Australia I was impressed by its unique coastal landscapes and wide open spaces, which felt very different from what I usually see at home.

× I usually use my film camera to taking picture to take picture.

✓ I usually use my film camera to take pictures.

The phrase 'to taking' is incorrect because after 'to' (part of the infinitive) the base verb form should be used, not the -ing form. Also 'picture' should be plural when speaking generally about taking photos. Suggestion: use the infinitive 'to take' and plural 'pictures' for general activities.

× And I like to take a picture of nature, nature view.

✓ And I like to take pictures of nature; I enjoy natural views.

The repetition 'nature, nature view' is awkward and ungrammatical. Use 'nature' as a noun with 'pictures of nature' or the compound noun 'natural views.' Also use plural 'pictures' when referring to the activity in general. Suggestion: combine into a clear phrase such as 'take pictures of nature' or 'enjoy natural views.'

× I prefer the countryside areas because I like the view of the nature and mountains without high rise buildings.

✓ I prefer the countryside because I like the views of nature and the mountains without high-rise buildings.

'The countryside areas' is redundant; 'the countryside' is the natural phrase. 'The view of the nature' is incorrect: use 'views of nature' (no article before 'nature') and 'the mountains' needs the definite article. 'High rise' should be hyphenated as 'high-rise.' Suggestion: simplify noun phrases and use correct articles and hyphenation.

× It gives me peaceful atmosphere and make me.

✓ It gives me a peaceful atmosphere and makes me feel calm.

The sentence lacks an article before 'peaceful atmosphere' and has a verb agreement and incomplete clause: 'make me' is incomplete. 'Gives' is singular so the second verb must be 'makes' (subject-verb agreement) and should be followed by an object or complement such as 'feel calm.' Suggestion: add 'a' before 'peaceful atmosphere' and complete the second clause 'makes me feel calm.'

× I prefer views in other countries because views of my country is too familiar to me and when I was in Australia for a trip, I like the nature view of Australia.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because the views of my country are too familiar to me, and when I was in Australia on a trip, I liked Australia's natural scenery.

Multiple issues: 'views of my country is' has subject-verb disagreement; 'views' plural requires 'are.' 'When I was in Australia for a trip'—the common phrase is 'on a trip.' 'I like' should be past 'I liked' to match 'when I was' (past tense). 'Nature view of Australia' is unnatural; use 'Australia's natural scenery' or 'the natural scenery in Australia.' Suggestion: make verb tenses consistent, fix subject-verb agreement, and use natural collocations like 'on a trip' and 'natural scenery.'