Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more fluent and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), correct verb forms, and limit to 2–3 sentences. Add a specific example to make it vivid. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views when I travel because photographing landscapes and city scenes helps me relax and preserve happy memories. For example, on my last trip I photographed a mountain sunrise and later looked at the photos to remember how peaceful it felt.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and specific reasons with correct grammar. Reduce hesitations and use linking words (for example, "because", "especially"). Give 1–2 concrete examples (e.g., skyline at night, street markets) to support your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because cities offer diverse scenes such as illuminated skyscrapers and lively street markets. For example, I like photographing the skyline at night and busy restaurant streets because the lights and activity create dramatic, interesting photos.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first and then 1–2 clear, specific reasons. Correct phrasing (e.g., "I prefer my own country") and avoid vague phrases. Use linking words like "because" and include an example or brief explanation of cultural/historical sites you photograph.

Exemplo: I prefer taking pictures in my own country because I feel more connected to its cultural and historical sites, and it is cheaper and easier to travel locally. For instance, I often photograph old temples and traditional festivals that reflect our heritage and are easily accessible.

× Yes, uh, I would like capturing different types of scenarios when whenever I travel.

✓ Yes, I would like to capture different types of scenes whenever I travel.

The phrase 'would like' should be followed by the base form of the verb (infinitive without to) or 'to' + infinitive; 'capturing' is incorrect after 'would like'. Also 'scenarios' is better as 'scenes' for photographic contexts and 'when whenever' is redundant; choose 'whenever'. Suggestion: use 'would like to capture' and simplify to 'whenever I travel'.

× This is because it can helps me to it can help me to feel more comfortable and finding some kind of happy memories on my mind.

✓ This is because it can help me feel more comfortable and find happy memories.

After modal-like verb 'can' the base form 'help' must be used, not 'helps'. The phrase 'to it can help me to' is redundant; use one construction. Use parallel verbs 'help me feel' and 'find' rather than 'finding'. Also 'some kind of happy memories on my mind' is unnatural; 'find happy memories' is clearer. Suggestion: keep verbs in base form after 'can' and use parallel structure.

× Uh, urban areas are, are the best, uh, compared to the rural areas.

✓ Urban areas are better than rural areas.

Saying 'the best' implies comparison with all possible options and requires a superlative context; here a simple comparative 'better than' is appropriate. Also avoid redundant 'are, are' and unnecessary fillers. Suggestion: use 'better than' for a direct comparison.

× This is because in urban areas, there are a lot of beautiful, uh, places to pay, uh, to capture like, uh, restaurants, high, high building is, and especially in the, in the evening, the city become one of the beautiful place to.

✓ This is because urban areas have many beautiful places to photograph, like restaurants and tall buildings, and especially in the evening the city becomes very beautiful.

Multiple issues: 'places to pay' is incorrect; likely intended 'places to photograph' or 'to visit'. 'High building is' is ungrammatical — use 'tall buildings'. 'There are a lot of' can be simplified to 'have many' or 'there are many'. 'The city become' requires subject-verb agreement: 'the city becomes'. 'One of the beautiful place to' is incorrect article and structure; use 'very beautiful' or 'one of the most beautiful places'. Suggestions: use correct collocations ('places to photograph', 'tall buildings'), correct subject-verb agreement and proper article/plural forms.

× Uh, it's this moment. I definitely prefer our country to capturing different types of pictures.

✓ At the moment, I definitely prefer my country for taking different types of pictures.

'It's this moment' is unnatural; say 'At the moment'. 'Prefer our country to capturing' mixes structures incorrectly. Use 'prefer X to Y' or 'prefer X for V-ing'. Here use 'prefer my country for taking' or 'prefer my country to other countries for taking'. Also 'our' vs 'my' depends on speaker — 'my country' is more natural when speaking personally. Suggestion: choose correct comparative structure and natural time phrase.

× This is because it is this, uh, country more connect our cultural and historical value, and also it is cheaper and also easier to capture for me.

✓ This is because this country is more connected to our cultural and historical heritage, and it is also cheaper and easier for me to take pictures here.

Problems: 'it is this country' wrong word order; use 'this country is'. 'More connect our cultural and historical value' is incorrect — use passive/adj form 'connected to' and 'heritage' or 'values'. 'Cheaper and easier to capture for me' misuses 'capture'; use 'take pictures' and place 'for me' appropriately. Suggestion: use correct word order, use 'connected to' with the noun 'heritage' or 'values', and use natural collocation 'take pictures'.