Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and directly addresses the question, but it has small grammar errors, minor redundancy and could be slightly more specific. Improve accuracy (e.g., "sometimes"), vary linking words, and add one concrete example to make it more vivid. Keep responses concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing scenic views when I travel because the photos help me preserve memories. For example, I often take pictures of coastal sunsets and later look at them when I want to relax. This helps me recall the atmosphere and details of each trip.

Sugestão: Good clear response with relevant reasons and specific examples. To improve, add a linking phrase to connect ideas and include a brief personal detail or contrast to strengthen coherence (e.g., mention a particular place or feeling). Maintain concise structure and check small punctuation use.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they are much quieter than cities and feel more peaceful. For instance, I love looking at mountain valleys and lakes since they help me unwind after a hectic week in Bangkok. In contrast, city views often feel too busy for me.

Sugestão: The idea is good, but there are several grammar and word-choice errors that affect clarity ("board" unclear, subject-verb agreement, and awkward phrasing). Fix vocabulary (e.g., "abroad"), correct grammar ("every country has something unique"), and provide a concise supporting example. Use a linking phrase to introduce the exception.

Exemplo: I enjoy photographing views both at home and abroad, but if I had to choose, I prefer other countries. This is because different countries offer unique landscapes and cultural scenes — for example, I loved the dramatic fjords in Norway, which look very different from anything I've seen in Thailand.

× It helps me keep good memories and sometime I look back at those photos when I want to relax or remember a trip.

✓ It helps me keep good memories and sometimes I look back at those photos when I want to relax or remember a trip.

Two issues: 'sometime' is an adverb meaning 'at an unspecified time' and is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'sometimes' meaning 'occasionally'. Also 'good memories' is acceptable but consider 'keep memories' is fine; main correction is 'sometime' to 'sometimes'. Use 'sometimes' when referring to habitual or occasional actions. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I enjoy board, but if I had to choose I would say other countries.

✓ I enjoy both, but if I had to choose I would say other countries.

'Board' is a misspelling or wrong word; the intended word is 'both' to contrast two options. Use 'both' when referring to two alternatives. No subject-verb change needed. Also ensure clarity in speech: pronounce and spell 'both'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I like experiencing different landscapes and cultures because every country have you something unique that I can't easily find in Thailand.

✓ I like experiencing different landscapes and cultures because every country has something unique that I can't easily find in Thailand.

Two errors: subject-verb agreement and extra pronoun. 'Every country' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has' not 'have'. Also 'have you something' is incorrect word order and unnecessary 'you'; the correct phrase is 'has something'. Remove 'you' to make standard English. Grammar problem type ID:27