Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler phrases. Also correct minor grammar issues (e.g., “clicking pictures of different views” -> “taking pictures of different views”) and remove duplicated phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I see a striking sunset or an unusual skyline, I photograph it to share with my family. Because photos capture a moment that disappears, I try to frame the scene quickly and focus on what makes it special.

Sugestão: Provide a clear preference or explain equal preference with specific examples and use linking words for coherence. Remove repetitions (e.g., “If if”, “in every year in everywhere”) and correct awkward phrases. Keep answers within 2–3 sentences max.

Exemplo: I don't have a strong preference; I appreciate both urban and rural views. For instance, I enjoy urban skylines at night for their lights, but I also love rural sunsets because they feel peaceful; overall I choose based on how striking the scene is.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer followed by a specific reason and an example. Replace vague repetition with concrete details and link sentences smoothly. Avoid listing similar phrases; be precise about what appeals to you abroad.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new landscapes and cultural features I haven't seen at home. For example, I would love to photograph mountain villages in Switzerland or coastal cliffs in Portugal, since these scenes are different from the beaches and sunsets I'm used to at home.

× Yes, in general I do like clicking pictures or different views because firstly it depends on my mood and secondly it depends on how the view is coming out.

✓ Yes, in general I do like taking pictures of different views because firstly it depends on my mood and secondly it depends on how the view turns out.

The learner used 'clicking pictures' and 'coming out' which are awkward or incorrect collocations in this context. 'Take pictures' is the correct collocation, and 'how the view turns out' is the natural present-tense phrasing. Use simple present verbs for general habits; replace 'coming out' with 'turns out' for clarity and idiomatic English.

× Because sometimes I really want to show it to my family and friends, but of course I cannot capture it forever.

✓ Sometimes I really want to show a view to my family and friends, but of course I cannot capture it forever.

The original begins with 'Because' creating a sentence fragment when combined with the previous sentence. Also 'show it' is vague; specify 'a view'. Start with 'Sometimes' to form a complete sentence and keep tense consistent. This fixes the sentence structure and clarity.

× So I take it I take a picture of that view.

✓ So I take a picture of that view.

The phrase duplicates 'I take'; this is a redundancy and creates an awkward sentence. Removing the repeated clause yields a correct and concise simple present sentence describing a habitual action.

× I would say I prefer both views in general.

✓ I would say I generally prefer both kinds of views.

'In general' placed after 'prefer' is acceptable but 'both views' is vague; 'both kinds of views' clarifies that the speaker means rural and urban. Reordering to 'generally prefer' sounds more natural in English.

× If if the scene, the scenario in front of me is quite attractive and fascinating, then it doesn't matter if it's a rural area or an urban area because it's the sky view that I love the most.

✓ If the scene in front of me is attractive and fascinating, then it doesn't matter whether it is a rural or an urban area, because I love the sky view the most.

Remove the duplicated 'If'. 'Whether' is better than repeating 'if' in this contrast. 'Scenario' is redundant after 'scene'; simplify. Use 'it is' instead of the contraction for clarity. Reorder 'I love the sky view the most' for natural emphasis.

× And it's the same in every year in everywhere.

✓ And it is the same every year and everywhere.

The phrase 'in every year in everywhere' is ungrammatical. Use 'every year and everywhere' for correct adverbial phrases. Keep verb 'is' in present simple to indicate a habitual or general truth.

× I prefer view of different countries.

✓ I prefer views of different countries.

'View' is countable here and should be plural when referring generally to views from many countries. Use the plural noun 'views' to match the general preference.

× I cannot choose one because in my country I have already seen a lot of views, sky views, the sunset at the beach.

✓ I cannot choose one because in my country I have already seen many views, such as sky views and sunsets at the beach.

List items need parallel structure and correct plural forms. 'A lot of' can be replaced with 'many' for formality. 'Sunset at the beach' should be plural 'sunsets at the beach' and the list benefits from 'such as' to introduce examples.

× So I would like to experience different views in different countries.

✓ So I would like to experience different views in other countries.

'Different countries' is acceptable but 'other countries' is more natural when contrasting with 'my country' mentioned earlier. The modal 'would like' correctly expresses preference; keep present/future sense consistent.