Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct minor errors (e.g., remove repeated words). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples using linking words. Also avoid filler sounds like “uh.”

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I often photograph interesting scenes with my iPhone; for example, I’ll take shots of impressive buildings or unusual factories when I see them. I always try to capture unique angles so the photos feel different.

Sugestão: Provide a clearer topic sentence and more specific reasons with linking words. Reduce repetition (avoid saying 'urban areas' multiple times). Give one concrete example to support your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views. Urban scenes interest me because of the variety of architecture and busy street life; for instance, I enjoy photographing old cathedrals alongside modern skyscrapers. In contrast, rural areas can feel too quiet for my taste.

Sugestão: Make the grammar accurate (e.g., 'views in other countries' not 'views another country') and expand slightly with a specific reason or example using linking words. Mention one concrete element that excites you about other countries.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because exposure to different cultures and landscapes inspires me; for example, the colorful markets and dramatic mountain scenery in parts of Latin America always amaze me. Therefore I often plan trips specifically to photograph those scenes.

× I always take different picture pictures though of different views with my iPhone.

✓ I always take different pictures of various views with my iPhone.

The original uses 'picture pictures' (duplication) and 'different views' is fine but 'different picture pictures' is ungrammatical. Also 'different' modifying 'pictures' and 'of different views' is redundant; rephrase to 'different pictures of various views'. Use plural 'pictures' to match 'take'. Improve clarity and avoid repetition. Suggestion: say 'I always take different pictures of various views with my iPhone.'

× Uh, for example, if I just see a large factory or magnificent building an interesting place, I always remember to take pictures with my phone.

✓ For example, if I see a large factory, a magnificent building, or any other interesting place, I always remember to take pictures with my phone.

The original sentence lacks proper punctuation and coordination between nouns; items need parallel structure separated by commas or conjunctions. 'Just' is unnecessary. 'An interesting place' should be coordinated with the other items using 'or'. Rewriting with commas and 'or any other' creates a clear list and correct sentence flow. Suggestion: use parallel nouns and commas when listing: 'a large factory, a magnificent building, or any other interesting place.'

× I like views in both areas, but if I have to choose one of them, I'd definitely say urban areas, because urban areas are very interesting to me.

✓ I like views in both areas, but if I had to choose one, I'd definitely say the urban areas because they are very interesting to me.

In this context, use conditional 'if I had to choose' (more natural) though present is acceptable; main issue is article/pronoun use: 'urban areas' refers to previously mentioned 'both areas' so 'the urban areas' or 'urban areas' with pronoun 'they'. Use 'they' to avoid repetition. Also 'one of them' is redundant if you specify 'one'. Suggestion: say 'if I had to choose one, I'd definitely say the urban areas because they are very interesting to me.'

× It is not that rural areas are not interesting because rural areas can sometimes be very quiet.

✓ It's not that rural areas aren't interesting; it's just that they can sometimes be very quiet.

Repetition 'rural areas' is awkward; replace with pronoun 'they'. Also the original double negative shape 'It is not that rural areas are not interesting because rural areas can sometimes be very quiet' is confusing. Rephrase to show contrast: 'It's not that...; it's just that...'. Suggestion: use pronouns and a clearer contrast structure: 'It's not that rural areas aren't interesting; it's just that they can be very quiet.'

× I don't like to be too quiet.

✓ I don't like places to be too quiet.

Original 'I don't like to be too quiet' implies the speaker personally being quiet, which probably isn't intended; context suggests they dislike quiet places. Change structure to 'I don't like places to be too quiet' for intended meaning. Suggestion: ensure subject expresses the intended idea: 'places' rather than 'I.'

× To be honest, I prefer views another country over my own country because different culture and food and landscape always take my breath away.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views in other countries to those in my own country because different cultures, foods, and landscapes always take my breath away.

Needs correct prepositions: 'views in other countries' and comparative structure 'prefer A to B'. Also noun pluralization: 'different cultures, foods, and landscapes' and parallelism for list items. Use 'those in my own country' to refer back to 'views'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer views in other countries to those in my own country because different cultures, foods, and landscapes always take my breath away.'

× I like views of Latin America in particular.

✓ I especially like the views of Latin America.

Original is understandable but word order/preposition choice can be improved: 'I especially like the views of Latin America' flows better and uses definite article 'the' because referring to a specific region's views. Suggestion: use 'especially' and 'the views of Latin America' for natural phrasing.