Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and repetition, and add one brief specific reason or example. Keep to under five sentences and use linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because each scene tells a unique story. For example, I love capturing city skylines at dusk and rural fields at sunrise, which offer very different colours and moods.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear preference sentence, reduce hesitation, and support your choice with specific reasons and one brief example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'while' to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they offer peaceful landscapes and natural colours. For instance, I enjoy photographing misty fields and winding country roads, which create a calm and timeless atmosphere.

Sugestão: Be careful with vocabulary and grammar: avoid incorrect words ('abuse') and provide a clear, grammatically correct statement. State your preference, give a specific reason and an example of a country or landscape. Keep answers concise and polished.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because some places have more varied landscapes. For example, I admire the diverse scenery in Switzerland, from alpine peaks to clear lakes, which is different from the flatter areas near my hometown.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures of different scenario because uh, stick into the only one view or only one scenario would give you a very limited uh uh, limited uh uh achievement.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different scenes because sticking to only one view or one scenario gives you very limited achievement.

The sentence has multiple structure problems: incorrect noun form 'scenario' (should be plural 'scenes' or 'scenarios') and awkward verb phrase 'stick into the only one view'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Use 'sticking to' for the gerund form after because and match singular/plural and verb agreement: 'gives' agrees with singular subject 'sticking to only one view'. Remove filler words and repetitions to make the sentence clear.

× However, having a different views pictures will give you.

✓ However, having different views in pictures will give you more variety.

The phrase 'a different views pictures' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'views' and misorders nouns. This is an adjective/adverb usage and noun phrase formation issue (ID 13). Remove the incorrect article, place adjectives before nouns ('different views in pictures'), and complete the clause with an object ('more variety').

× Uh, I think urban areas have a different, uh, beauty as well as the rural area having another beauty, beauty feature.

✓ I think urban areas have a certain beauty, and rural areas have a different kind of beauty.

The original repeats words and uses incorrect clause forms ('the rural area having'). This is an adjective/adverb and sentence structure issue (ID 13). Use parallel structure: 'urban areas have... and rural areas have...' and avoid repetition.

× So, so we cannot compare, uh, one with another.

✓ So we cannot compare one with the other.

Redundant filler 'so, so' and the phrase 'one with another' is informal; this is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Use 'the other' for clearer comparison and remove fillers.

× However, those two, uh, areas are very unique with their unique features.

✓ However, those two areas are unique because of their different features.

Using 'very unique' is stylistically problematic (unique is absolute) and 'with their unique features' is awkward. This is a subject-verb agreement/word choice error (ID 27). Rephrase to 'are unique because of their different features' to improve clarity and grammar.

× I do prefer, uh, rural areas pictures more than the urban areas because, uh, this, uh, scenario.

✓ I prefer pictures of rural areas more than those of urban areas because I like that kind of scenery.

The original uses 'rural areas pictures' incorrectly and 'this scenario' is vague. This is an incorrect pronoun/noun phrase use (ID 12). Use 'pictures of rural areas' and replace vague 'this scenario' with 'that kind of scenery' for clarity.

× I do prefer abuse of another countries because I think there is some countries in the world who is blessed with natural beauty.

✓ I prefer pictures of other countries because I think some countries in the world are blessed with natural beauty.

The original has wrong preposition 'abuse of' (nonsense) and incorrect article use 'another countries'. Also 'who is' should be 'which are' or 'that are' for countries. This is an incorrect preposition issue (ID 11) combined with other errors; corrected to proper preposition 'of' and plural agreement 'are'.

× Bangladesh have some natural beauty but not not those up to the mark some.

✓ Bangladesh has some natural beauty, but not to the same extent.

Errors include plural verb 'have' instead of 'has' for singular 'Bangladesh', repetition 'not not', and awkward phrase 'up to the mark some'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) and subject-verb agreement (ID 27). Use 'Bangladesh has' and rephrase to 'not to the same extent.'

× I think Europe's countries are having the most beautiful views, different landscape and.

✓ I think European countries have the most beautiful views and varied landscapes.

'Europe's countries' is awkward; use 'European countries'. 'Are having' is incorrect continuous use; 'have' is correct. This is an incorrect pronoun/word choice and tense form issue (IDs 12 and 6). Also complete the list ('views and varied landscapes') and avoid trailing 'and.'