Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more fluent and correct grammar; avoid fillers and repeat phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct nouns and verb forms (e.g., 'taking pictures is one of my favorite things').

Exemplo: Yes — I love taking pictures of different views. For example, when I go out I often photograph nature and wildlife, and I especially enjoy capturing sunsets because the colours change quickly. As a result, I take many shots to get the perfect light.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference or say you like both, then use linking words and specific details. Fix grammar and vocabulary (e.g., 'city lights', 'greenery'). Organize into 2–3 short sentences to be natural and coherent.

Exemplo: I enjoy both urban and rural views because they offer different atmospheres. For instance, urban scenes have bright city lights, tall buildings and dramatic skies, whereas rural areas offer peaceful greenery and open fields. Therefore, I often choose based on my mood.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a topic sentence and give concise reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'I was raised there', 'I enjoy the scenery'). Avoid trailing off; finish sentences and include 1–2 specific examples or feelings.

Exemplo: I prefer views in Sri Lanka because it is my homeland where I was raised. For example, the beaches, lush hills and traditional villages there feel familiar and peaceful, so I enjoy those landscapes more than the urban scenery in Japan.

× It is definitely, uh, taking picture is one of my favorite thing.

✓ It is definitely; taking pictures is one of my favorite things.

The original sentence has awkward structure and errors with countable nouns and articles. 'Taking picture' should be plural 'taking pictures' and 'one of my favorite thing' should be 'one of my favorite things' because 'one of' requires a plural noun. Also the clause 'It is definitely' is disconnected; adding a semicolon or removing it makes the sentence flow. Suggestion: say 'It is definitely a favorite hobby; taking pictures is one of my favorite things' or simply 'Taking pictures is one of my favorite things.'

× Uh, whenever I go out, I capture everything, especially nature and wildlife.

✓ Whenever I go out, I capture everything, especially nature and wildlife.

This sentence is mostly correct grammatically; the main issue was the filler 'Uh' which is unnecessary. No plural/singular error here; left sentence unchanged except removing filler. For clarity, keep present simple tense for habitual action. Suggestion: avoid fillers in formal responses.

× Uh, the most varied thing to capture is sunset.

✓ The most varied thing to capture is the sunset.

Countable noun 'sunset' when referring to sunsets in general often takes the definite article 'the' to indicate the phenomenon. Alternatively, plural 'sunsets' can be used: 'the most varied things to capture are sunsets.' Choose one consistent form. Suggestion: use 'the sunset' or 'sunsets' depending on emphasis.

× Uh, when I see any sunset, I take lots of pictures.

✓ When I see a sunset, I take a lot of pictures.

'Any sunset' is unnatural here; use 'a sunset' or 'sunsets.' 'Lots of pictures' is conversational; 'a lot of pictures' is more standard in speaking. The present simple tense is correct for habitual action. Suggestion: say 'When I see a sunset, I take a lot of pictures.'

× I like both views, rural areas and urban areas because it gives different feelings especially when it come to urban area.

✓ I like both rural and urban views because they give different feelings, especially when it comes to urban areas.

Problems: word order and coordination ('both views, rural areas and urban areas' should be 'both rural and urban views'), subject-verb agreement ('it gives' should be 'they give' to match plural 'views'), and verb form 'come' needs third person singular 'comes' but with 'it' is wrong; with 'it comes to' not appropriate—use 'when it comes to urban areas.' Suggestion: restructure as corrected to fix coordination and agreement.

× There's a city lights, buildings and urban skies and rural areas greeny and mine.

✓ There are city lights, buildings, and urban skies, while rural areas are green and quiet.

Multiple errors: 'There's' (there is) should be 'There are' for plural 'city lights, buildings.' 'Greenny' is not a word; 'green' is the adjective, and sentence fragment 'and mine' is unclear. I replaced 'mine' with 'quiet' as a plausible intended meaning; if 'mine' meant 'my area' rephrase to 'and my hometown is rural' etc. Suggestion: use 'There are' with plural nouns and correct adjectives like 'green' and complete the comparison.

× Umm, I'm living in Japan but I'm originally from Sri Lanka.

✓ I'm living in Japan, but I'm originally from Sri Lanka.

This sentence is acceptable; I adjusted punctuation only. Note: 'I'm living in Japan' implies temporary present continuous; if permanent, use 'I live in Japan.' Suggestion: choose 'I live in Japan' for general residency.

× So when comparing with Japan and Sri Lanka, I prefer Sri Lanka because it's my motherland I raised there.

✓ So when comparing Japan and Sri Lanka, I prefer Sri Lanka because it's my motherland where I was raised.

Errors: 'comparing with Japan and Sri Lanka' should be 'comparing Japan and Sri Lanka' or 'when comparing Japan with Sri Lanka.' 'My motherland I raised there' is ungrammatical: use a relative clause 'where I was raised' and past passive 'was raised' to indicate upbringing. Suggestion: use 'where I was raised' and correct comparison phrasing.

× I enjoy every scenarios in Sri Lanka and.

✓ I enjoy every scene in Sri Lanka.

'Every scenarios' mixes singular 'every' with plural 'scenarios'; 'every' should be followed by a singular noun like 'scene' or use 'all the scenarios.' Also the sentence ends with a stray 'and.' I simplified to 'I enjoy every scene in Sri Lanka.' Suggestion: use 'every' with a singular noun or use 'all' with a plural noun and avoid sentence fragments.