Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be careful with grammar and word choice. Use a clear topic sentence and 1–2 supporting details, avoiding redundancy. Correct verb forms (enjoy → enjoy/enjoyed; to taking → taking) and use singular/plural and article forms properly. Add a linking phrase to make the answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially landscapes, because they help me remember trips. For example, I often take pictures on my phone when I visit parks or coastlines, and later I look back at them to recall the memories.

Sugestão: Simplify and correct grammar; use one clear reason with a linking word. Avoid repetition and incorrect collocations (environment friend friendly → environmentally friendly; calm and peace → calm and peaceful). Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they are more peaceful and environmentally friendly. For instance, quiet fields and forests make me feel relaxed, so I like photographing them when I want a calm atmosphere.

Sugestão: Use present tense for general preferences and correct noun/verb agreement (every region has; specialties, deserts?). Be specific and concise; give one or two concrete examples of different landscapes. Use linking words to organize ideas (for example, however, also).

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has a wide variety of landscapes. For example, the northern mountains offer dramatic scenery, while the southern beaches and deserts provide very different colours and textures to photograph.

× I enjoyed to taking pictures of different views and mostly I would capture the scenery views on my phones and it's a very memorable thing for me.

✓ I enjoy taking pictures of different views, and I mostly capture scenic views on my phone; it is very memorable for me.

The student used 'enjoyed to taking' which mixes past tense 'enjoyed' with the incorrect infinitive+ing form. 'Enjoy' is followed by a gerund (verb+ing), so use 'enjoy taking'. Also 'scenery views' is unnatural; use the adjective 'scenic' and singular 'phone' or 'my phone' instead of 'phones'. Change tense to present 'enjoy' to match the question about likes. Use punctuation to separate ideas. Suggestion: Use 'enjoy + verb-ing' (e.g., 'I enjoy taking pictures') and use appropriate adjectives ('scenic') and singular/plural consistency ('my phone').

× Well, I mostly preferred of views of rural areas as it's a very environment friend friendly views and also give a scenario that gives a very calm and peace to myself and it's a very good thing to capture the views of rural areas.

✓ Well, I mostly prefer views of rural areas because they are environmentally friendly and give a sense of calm and peace to me, so it is very nice to capture rural views.

The student used 'preferred' (past) though question asks preference generally; use present 'prefer'. 'Preferred of views of' is incorrect preposition use and verb choice—should be 'prefer views of'. 'Environment friend friendly views' is incorrect; use adjective phrase 'environmentally friendly'. 'Give a scenario that gives a very calm and peace to myself' is awkward and ungrammatical: use 'give a sense of calm and peace to me'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'views... are' not 'is'. Suggestions: Use present simple for habitual preferences, correct prepositions ('prefer views of'), use adverbial forms ('environmentally friendly'), and avoid reflexive 'myself' when 'me' is appropriate.

× I enjoyed the views of my own country as there are so many landscapes in my country.

✓ I enjoy the views in my own country because there are so many landscapes there.

The student used past 'enjoyed' though the question asks about general preference; use present 'enjoy'. 'Of my own country' is acceptable but 'in my own country' is more natural. Repeated 'my country' is redundant; replace second instance with 'there'. Suggestion: Use present simple for general statements and avoid repetition.

× The every region have their own specialty deserts and the mountains or the beaches are different types of views gives a variation of different things.

✓ Every region has its own specialty deserts, mountains, or beaches, which provide varied kinds of scenery.

Errors: 'The every region' should be 'Every region' (article misuse), subject-verb agreement 'region have' should be 'region has'. 'Their' with 'every region' is better as 'its' (singular). 'Specialty deserts' is awkward but acceptable as 'specialty deserts'; ensure plural agreement. The clause 'the mountains or the beaches are different types of views gives a variation of different things' is ungrammatical: use a relative clause 'which provide varied kinds of scenery'. Suggestions: Use correct article placement ('Every region'), match singular subject with singular possessive ('its') and singular verb ('has'), and simplify complex phrases into clear relative clauses.