Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is mostly natural and relevant with clear reasons and examples. To improve, tighten phrasing, avoid small vocabulary or phrasing errors (e.g. “quick spots”) and use one linking phrase to make the contrast clearer. Keep it within 3–4 sentences for concision.

Exemplo: I usually prefer handwriting because it helps my ideas flow more naturally when I’m brainstorming; I can sketch and jot quick notes. However, when I’m tired or need to finish a document quickly, I prefer typing because it’s faster and more efficient.

Sugestão: The answer is unclear and contains many grammatical and coherence errors. Focus on directly answering the question (desktop or laptop) with a topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar (e.g. “I don't every day” → “I don't type every day”) and clear vocabulary (e.g. “copy/edit documents” instead of “friend document”).

Exemplo: I don’t type every day, but when I do I usually use a laptop because it’s portable. For example, I take it to a nearby café to work on my business tasks, check emails, and edit documents.

Sugestão: The answer is confusing and off-topic. Start with a clear time reference (e.g. “When I was in seventh grade”) and give a brief, relevant reason if needed. Avoid irrelevant details and correct verb tenses and word choice (e.g. “learned,” “keyboard,” “updates on social media”).

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was in seventh grade. At that time I wanted to follow a band online and type messages and comments, so I practised typing a lot to keep up with social media updates.

Sugestão: The content is relevant but contains repetition and awkward phrasing. Make sentences concise, correct repetitions (“regularly regularly”), and add a specific practice routine or result to make the answer more concrete. Use linking words (e.g. “because” or “so”) appropriately.

Exemplo: I improved my typing by practising on the MonkeyType website. Because I had to pass a typing test for a call centre job, I practised for 20–30 minutes every day to increase both my speed and accuracy.

× Actually, no, I don't have every day because I don't have my homework with me at the moment.

✓ Actually, no, I don't type every day because I don't have my homework with me at the moment.

The student used 'have' where the intended verb is 'type'. This is a verb choice error related to quantifying frequency. Replace 'have every day' with 'type every day' to express habitual action correctly.

× When I do, I go to the nearest home shop I usually take to work on my business and check my emails and sometimes I friend document there too.

✓ When I do, I go to the nearest shop I usually use to work on my business, check my emails, and sometimes work on documents there too.

The original sentence is a run-on with incorrect word choices ('home shop', 'take to work', 'friend document'). Break into clear coordinated actions and use appropriate verbs: 'use' a shop, 'work on' documents. Add commas to separate items in the list.

× I'll learn to type on a keyword what back when I was a 7th grade since I became a Caifa fan then I want to watch the music videos and having an updates about their vibes especially in their social medias.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard back when I was in 7th grade because I became a Caifa fan then and wanted to watch their music videos and get updates about them on social media.

The context refers to a past time, so past tense is required ('learned', 'wanted', 'get' -> 'get' should be 'get' changed to past 'get' but better 'get updates' -> 'get' becomes 'get' but keep consistent: used 'get' to mean receiving at that time so 'get' -> 'get' changed to 'get' past 'got' or 'get updates' is okay; corrected uses 'get updates' with past marker 'wanted to ... and get updates' could be 'and get updates' but kept clarity). Also corrected noun forms ('keyboard', '7th grade', 'social media') and removed extraneous words to make sentence grammatical and coherent.

× I improve my typing by using an online typing test site which is called Monkey Type Monkey Test.

✓ I improve my typing by using an online typing test site called MonkeyType.

The relative clause 'which is called' is wordy; using 'called' is more natural. Also 'Monkey Type Monkey Test' seemed duplicative; use the correct product name 'MonkeyType' or a concise form. Using 'using' is correct gerund form for method description.

× Rather, I started practicing because I had to take a typing test for a call center job, so I regularly regularly due time exercise to increase my speed and accuracy.

✓ I started practicing because I had to take a typing test for a call center job, so I regularly did timed exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

The action occurred in the past, so past tense 'did' is required. 'Regularly regularly due time exercise' is ungrammatical; replace with 'regularly did timed exercises'. 'Timed' is the correct adjective describing exercises done under time constraints.